Having fallen in love with a rich man’s daughter,
He joined the rat race and he fought like a hero
On sports battlefields he shone like a star.
He reached for the stars, but the beauty fluttered off,
Leaving a deep bleeding scar on his heart.
He was unconsolable when his loved one
Became someone else’s wife.
Years of agony and torment flew by
Like frames in a movie.
He had his own life and fathered own kin,
But the pain of forlorn passion was alive:
It burned his soul as painful as before.
He called her in the middle of the night
And cried out his pain, the pain of middle-aged man
Who had it all: the mansions and the cars
But one was still amiss: his loved and peerless one.
And on the other end she listened to the man
Who’s feelings she ignored, who’s love misunderstood.
Abandoned by her husband who fell for someone else,
She quietly shed her tears as she grasped
The depth of pain inflicted on the man
Who has been wanting her since years young,
Who dreamt of her like of a distant star,
Who came from rugs to riches but has not
Fulfilled his life’s long quest
For his forbidden dream, for gorgeous love.
He could have lived, surrounded by wealth
And known not despair for love long lost,
For empty soul
Which longed for one he worshipped,
But by mistake to death was sentenced
And later shot his tortured, lonely heart.
The soil his body took, but his immortal soul
Of happiness depraved,
In love with beauty, rich man’s daughter
Is roaming the Earth, protecting day and night
His loved one from mundane misfortunes.
Unrequited loves burns the soul deeply. The scars are permanent. A most interesting story, beautifully related with your poem. May peace be always with you. JMW
Stunning view of deep emotions I also felt
A deep sadness from the refusal of love
As my eyes dance from the beginning
To the end of page!!
Brilliant view of poetic thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning Star
Very deep emotions are felt here through the lines of "Dedication".
One can feel the sounds of passion throughout the reading of this vibrant and romantic lovely composition.
This is nice work, Liana...though the sadness of a soul tormented by the denied love of his heart screams from the words and thoughts of your poem...nice work...
A drama out of the pages of Tolstoy or Gorky, when the soul is tortured by fate, or the whims of those gods traveling with Siberian winds or hiding in the predawn fog of the slow moving Volga.
...words of sadness...of one so wished for...this love to never truly hold...but only one mans undying passion...until that too was lost. A story of ill fate...you have written with tears of beauty.
very well done Liana...
John
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Excellently done Liana!
Much Love,
Always!!
True Love?...
Peace, Diana
Yes, very dark indeed - superb poetry here!!
Best wishes,
Lance
the story, the feelings, the past, the present...
It could be the beginning of a short story or
a novella.
Axilea
longing for love write....Leana
You also write themost beautiful
and passionate poetry
Love & peace be with you
William
Harold M. Nash
A deep sadness from the refusal of love
As my eyes dance from the beginning
To the end of page!!
Brilliant view of poetic thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning Star
Vesna
Very deep emotions are felt here through the lines of "Dedication".
One can feel the sounds of passion throughout the reading of this vibrant and romantic lovely composition.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Art Sun...
Newfie Hugs,Rose
Georg
Regis
very well done Liana...
John
Be always safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
(((HUGS))) And much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D