Your loving eyes from an old photograph
Stare at me through the haze of time.
Why this affection when never before
You loved me, nor savored my love?
Why you bothered to show up now,
When, alas, all my life is behind me?
Or, perhaps, you were not aware
That someone in the Kingdom of Ice
Was worshiping you and desiring?
Why are you staring now through time
As if I was your chosen one, when
Another one was on your mind?
So, why are you stirring my soul? It has died
Waiting for your long journey back.
Why rekindle the fire of my dreams
By the memory of your Spanish passion?
Why this smile on the the lips of a youth,
Those lips that my face never touched?
Could it be that for one fleeting moment
You remembered the one who was waiting,
Who was longing for you, darling Spaniard
At the time when you put a wedding band
On the finger of some other woman?
No, the passion was never rekindled
In those darling Spanish eyes like before.
But in sweet dreams of mine I touched you
With the warm breath of my fervent love,
Waking up in the morning and finding
Only loneliness in my embrace.
How I wish I could turn back the time
Just to put my arms ‘round your shoulders
And to see my reflection again
In the stare of beloved Spanish eyes!
Oh love unrequited...how very sad...the longing is heart-wrenching, the pain is palpable...a beautiful, albeit melancholic, poem ... well written! Best, Elizabeth
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!! A LOOK BACK AT LOVE ...WISHING IT WAS MORE AND ...SORRY THAT 'YOU' WEREN'T THE ONE...STILL...'GRATEFUL' THAT IT WAS. A WELL DONE WORK SO ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Powerfully written! I wanted to read more very interesting Liana!
May the Lord always bless and prosper you! I will be back to read more, for each time I visit what golden nuggets! Be encouraged Liana.
Three times I read your "Portrait," and each time I felt more and more compassion for this dear heart that had tasted Spanish passion and, once lost, could not move on. And in each reading I knew with more and more certainty that she lives even now ten thousand fold in the hearts of forsaken women around the globe.
For all we have in life is Love. Once gone, how does one live except by
"Waking up in the morning and finding
Only loneliness in my embrace."
A deeply moving piece, my dear Liana, reflective of great pain and sadness.
Would you consider accepting my offer to walk barefoot and hand-in-hand along my California sea shore to feel the foaming water tinkling between your toes? I'll bring a bottle of fine wine to share as we place sweet memories on the shelf for another time. I think you have suffered enough.
With love, admiration and a quiet tear or two,
Richard
Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2008
A picture is eternal, and forever will we be reminded of the ones we loved and lost. And with that soft smile on their lips, the love in their eyes, maybe they loved us as much as we loved them.
This is beautiful. The desperation in the word choice reminds me a bit of one of my favorite poets, Anna Ahkmatova (misspelled, I am sure, lol). Excellent work.
Liana this is so beautiful
I Love the way you post the question
And the strong sentiments,yet painful tone longing
to turn back the time!!
I love the visuals I love the poem!!!
Brilliant Piece!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star
When we dream of a lost love, years of dreaming and longing can eventually turn into "no" feelings at all. You've described this in true form. A very nice write.
Liana,
This Is A Heart Yearning Write Of Passions Love Of Memories Faded Into An Undisturbed Rest. I embrace the beauty of this unforgotten love within the tender mercies of your longing words.
Love lives even in our memories...beautful write poetess
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Those spanish eyes lost the fire that they had for you and now are just ashes of something that could had be but never was.
The sadness of not having warm arms around our shoulders giving a loving hug and "that" whisper in our ear...
Georg
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2008
Liana..open your heart to a new expression of the love in your soul..allow another to bless you with his love..the love of YOUR Twin Soul can and does effuse from every dimension..accept one ray of it and just be happy ..loving, here,NOW. Let go of the past..live in the moment.
Blessings dear One,
Vesna :)
Ah, unrequited love, such a passionate yearning with sweet surrender almost! Very lovely and I enjoyed this very much.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
He was so in your mind and when you saw the portrait you could not help but think of the good times with him, but he was led astray to another. Sorry it did not work out with your Spanish Gentlemen.
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May the Lord always bless and prosper you! I will be back to read more, for each time I visit what golden nuggets! Be encouraged Liana.
Much Love!
Always!
God Bless you!
Talent you have in abundance!
God Blessed you.com
Amen!
For all we have in life is Love. Once gone, how does one live except by
"Waking up in the morning and finding
Only loneliness in my embrace."
A deeply moving piece, my dear Liana, reflective of great pain and sadness.
Would you consider accepting my offer to walk barefoot and hand-in-hand along my California sea shore to feel the foaming water tinkling between your toes? I'll bring a bottle of fine wine to share as we place sweet memories on the shelf for another time. I think you have suffered enough.
With love, admiration and a quiet tear or two,
Richard
Great poem. :)
Deeply crafted, stunning . . . well-done!
Lance
I love it
Richard
This is outstanding... "PORTRAIT" depicts the essences of emotions. It is a poetic Flower scented with love.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Harold M. Nash
Just to put my arms ‘round your shoulders
And to see my reflection again
In the stare of beloved Spanish eyes!
Ah yes... ...if only wishes could come true. A beautiful and expressive write, Liana. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Just to put my arms ‘round your shoulders
And to see my reflection again
In the stare of beloved Spanish eyes!
I Love the way you post the question
And the strong sentiments,yet painful tone longing
to turn back the time!!
I love the visuals I love the poem!!!
Brilliant Piece!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star
Longing passion at its best
Thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
William
This Is A Heart Yearning Write Of Passions Love Of Memories Faded Into An Undisturbed Rest. I embrace the beauty of this unforgotten love within the tender mercies of your longing words.
Love lives even in our memories...beautful write poetess
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
The sadness of not having warm arms around our shoulders giving a loving hug and "that" whisper in our ear...
Georg
Blessings dear One,
Vesna :)
Be always safe,
Karen
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Axilea