Even in death you would embrace the seasons--I love that. I can sense your pull to the sea, to your final resting place, your sepulcher. Emotive and well written! ~Hugs, Elizabeth

WELL DONE WITH EXCELLENT IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Liana,
What vivid imagination! Valid reasons not to die. Provoking emotions. A wonderful poem.
Denise Nowakowski

Splendid word choice and hypnotic rhythm. I am especially captivated by the last strophe. Beautiful poetic movement of the soul.

Axilea

Liana this is a very profound work, written with elegance
and very heartfelt! What an incredible gift you have, thanks
for blessing the den so graciously, and may your soul never
be lonely ever again. For the Lord is with you Liana, you
are such a prescious soul!!

Much Love
Always!!

I too chose the ocean, to wash away all my sins, and cleanse me forever more Liana!
To be washed away and spread out to the far corners of the Earth, sea and creatures to far more lasting abilities, may our spirits take us there...
This poem touched my heart and soul!
YOU write beautifully and I began tracking and following your heart as of 2:00A. our time! Glad to have met you spiritually!
YOU write with such imagery!!!
WRITE ON!

Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

A moving write, painted so vividly with each word.

Liana

From before the grave a unique poem of life .
Wonderful .
Paul

Incredible!

Utterly breathtaking! Superb...

Love, Diana

Written with depth and total humility! Its beauty captures the souls search for peace and tranquility and encases it within........M

My dear Liana,

I note with amazement that within one month's time so many authors of AD have felt touched in the same way by the sentiments of your beautiful poem. You speak with love and adoration of the wonder's of Nature and your not wanting to taint even the flowers with their loss of your love nor God's birds with their mourning.

You have spoken to me a number of times about your abiding love for the ocean, and it is fitting that you should will your remains to that which gave you love without demand. In your life you have known torment and loneliness, but in your passing you will be blessed by knowing peace and love.

Let me speak now for so many others here at Authorsden that we openly share with you our love for the great gifts you have presented us time and again with your words of wisdom and deep understanding of some of the torments in our own lives. Through your insight and the magic of the concerns of your heart, our burdens have been lightened and our souls have been touched.

Authorsden is a community of love and you, my dear Liana, are at the center of our admiration and our friendship. Let your loneliness take flight, for we are here with you and for you.

With love and respect,
Richard

Liana - Enjoyed your profound poem. It has the feeling of depth.
Especially liked:

No, I don’t want to die in the Spring

Can’t deprive all the flowers of my love,

And the birds of all colors won’t have to mourn

At the break of the dawn finding me in the backyard.

and the imagery of the calm resolution of:

I will turn into wave for eternity’s length,

And the freedom that’s been long awaited will gain.

I’ll return to the land and will foam up the sand,

To the land where I longed for the peace and the love.

And will give it a sweet and adoring embrace.

Especially liked, "I will turn into wave for eternity’s length,"

David

Wao! absolutely beautiful!

xoxoxox A m e n ! xoxoxox

That title alone draws the reader in and the intensity follows through this stunning poem.

a profoundly beautiful poem exploring mortality and the ramifications of its continuing form ...

John Masefield's, "Sea Fever", comes immediately to my mind Liana --the last line of the last verse, "And quiet sleep and a sweet dream when the long trick's over", when I read your line, "Let the ocean inherit my tormented soul" -- a very beautiful poetic exercise - peace and love to you Liana -- JMW

...you have written a most beautiful piece of poetry Liana...to return again...and again...in such touching words of remembrance.
...an outstanding creative work from the heart.
John

A splendid, heart touching poem Liana, the sea is where I too shall become an enternal wave...

Carole~

Beautiful and touching write Liana. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Beautiful poem. It offers a true sense of immortality. We are just bits of space dust, always reconfiguring into something else. ~ Sara

Such beautiful writing, Liana.

this is a lovely poem

This is really a nice work of expression through poem...you have emotions filled within each line...the comparisons and expectations are combined and written in a very expressive view of life and afterlife...

truly nice work...

Art Sun...

What a profound and eloquent poem! I'm being creamated
ashes dumped in the Ocean,so perhaps we'll meet there...
That is before God, takes us to heaven;-)

Eileen

All to the peace of flying into the wind and being carried off through the gentleness of angel wings...

Be always safe,
Karen

Just as we want to control our lives, we also would like to control the curcumstances of our demise--such as you not wishing to deprive the birds and flowers of your warm attention. But whether you do or don't, your wonderful poem expresses your wishes.

I love this line: "I’ll return to the land and will foam up the sand,"

I read this poem four times... It is an ontological spiritual flower diffusing scent of wonders and beauty. "NO, I DON’T WANT TO DIE IN SPRING" inspires and and stimulates creativity.

I must congratulate Master Anatol Kardiukov for his outstanding translation of "NO, I DON’T WANT TO DIE IN SPRING".

I salute Poet Liana Margiva for this beautiful composition.


In respect and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Liana, I feel drawn to the ocean too. But let'not rush it. We, in the words of Frost, have miles and miles to go before we rest. -gene.

I like that idea of being an eternal wave. Great write. Liz

Outstanding Poem....

A fantastic write Liana
no I wish that not for me neither
To be eaten by worms, polluting the wonderful scent, offending the loveliness of the wild flowers of the field
or my beloved place of dwelling....allow me to die in the cold freezing of winter
Love & Peace be with you

William

Dear Liana,

I'm with cremation also . . . a finely-penned write!!


Hugs,

Lance

My wife did not relish the thought of those worms eating at her earthly remains so opted for cremation and I will follow suit and we will stand together in a niche for time to come.