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River That Aches
by Steve Coltman → (All Poetry by Steve Coltman)
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The river was the centre of the town's industry but that has all changed

Some cities have buildings, some cities have lakes

But this is a small town with a river that aches

Docks where the men worked once lined both the banks

Building the carriers for our naval ranks

 

The docks are now filled and houses erected

But evidence of the past is always detected

Street names and sculptures to remind the present

Ark Royal Way and Northumbria Crescent

 

The river flows by – remembering it all

Tug boats and ferries on this magical mall

Ships launched sideways too long otherwise

I wonder if a jet ski it does now despise

 

Children invited to witness the launch

Time out of school one happy school bunch

Another new ship is sent on its way

Proud sons of their father all having their say

 

My dad built that one, what about yours?

My dad built this one (with some help of course)

All so simple – the children don’t know

When they need a job, where will they go

 

So some cities have buildings, some cities have lakes

But this is a small town with a river that aches

The river that held not just frigates and boats

The river’s still there but gone are the hopes

 

27/06/08 © Steve Coltman

 


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 Reviews of "River That Aches"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Profoundy sad and yet many a port city has lost its mainstay, leaving the towns peopel to wonder where they will go...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
well said

Reviewed on June 27, 2008
Such a sad tale about how things are being destroyed by man or nature. It's hard to get back what is lost.

Mary

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on June 27, 2008
I think you could write an entire novel called "The River that Aches"--this is a vivid picture. I was born in New Orleans, visiting just once after I left at 3 months of age. Luckily, I visited the spring before Katrina. Good write, Steve. Eileen


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