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Please don't hurt the baby
by Alice m Donatelli → (All Poetry by Alice m Donatelli)
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i am the grandmother of these twins. i love them very much.


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PLEASE DON'T HURT THE BABY
he was only a little boy of three,
when his daddy came home late,
the little boy started crying,
his daddy's anger turned to hate.
his daddy went into his room,
it was more then he could stand,
shut up his daddy told him,
as he hit him with his hand.
please don't hurt the baby,
the little boy did say,
his daddy looked into his eyes,
and slowly walked away.
when the little boy grew older,
a baby sister came their way,
she was a sickly baby,
but her brother loved her anyway.
one night she started crying,
her daddy was so up tight,
he went into the baby's room,
and shook her with all his might.
please don't hurt the baby,
the little girl did say,
she looked into her daddy's eyes,
then she passed away.
the little boy became a man,
he got married to a wonderful wife,
he soon became a daddy,
his son was his whole life.
the little baby  started crying,
he was tired from working all day,
but he went into his baby's room,
and held him anyway.
he looked into his big blue eyes,
and held his baby tight,
please don't hurt the baby,
were the words that ended that night.

 penned by Alice Donatelli




    




  

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Reviewed by Anna M
Reviewed on October 24, 2006

A brilliant piece. Hopefully this will help to spread more awareness of an all too common, tragic senario. As a new mum, to my eight week old little boy, I cannot think of many things more horrendous than child abuse. People need to be educated about dealing with their stress and coping with frustrations, instead of taking it out on small, defenceless people that we are supposed to protect. Thankyou for writing this!

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

"Please don't hurt the baby"

Alice, superbly penned, horrific, gut knotting write!
This is about the best penning I have had the opportunity
to read about child abuse!

Sincerely Gwendolyn
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2006
Phew my hairs stood on end, thinking the worse....
Damn splendid write...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
The cycle of dysfunction broken; the sins of the father do not need to be visited upon the children. Thank you for sharing this offering, Alice. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Powerful read, Alice; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
POWERFUL, POWERFUL, POWERFUL Alice. I also write for the children. Many can't speak up for themselves. Thank you for being their voice. Child abuse is so widespread, we need to shout it to the world..DON'T HURT THE BABY. Awesome poetry.

~Linda

Reviewed on September 12, 2006
P O W E R F U L, Alice, and very moving. Excellent...and a shattering, telling write. B E A U T I F U L babies, beautiful you, for sharing them!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla (also a twin)

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 12, 2006
WOW, Alice. This is powerful and gave me chills.
A great write.
Hugs,
CJ

Reviewed on September 12, 2006
Shaking a baby is so easily in killing it. It is called the shaken-baby-syndrome, because the baby's neck is so soft and so easily to be broken. People should not have babies unless they're ready for them. I'm glad the son grew up to be a caring father.

Good write, Alice!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel


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