"How to write a Triolet" was quite an interesting experience as I read the article on Forward Press website. I guess I'm just a romantic soul!
Path of Least Resistance
You stole my heart the night we met
Your eyes foretold the love we'd share
Resisting you, I turned and yet
You stole my heart the night we met
My heart leaped in a pirouette
Fingers caressed your silken hair
You stole my heart the night we met
Your eyes foretold the love we'd share
You stole my heart with your sweet verse
so beautifully presented and so well rehearsed
You stole my heart with your sweet words
The most beautiful words this heart has heard
Wonderful writing,
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2010
its a song to ears Connie..so beautifully done.....bring forth more of romance.... :) best wishes...neerja
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so beautifully presented and so well rehearsed
You stole my heart with your sweet words
The most beautiful words this heart has heard
Wonderful writing,
God bless,
Lew
Fee
Nice job!! I like the lively meter of this poem. I never heard of this style before. I'd like to see more of it, though.
Micki
This poem is romantic for sure. You captured the heart of the romantic as you weaved your desire into words. Very well done, Connie.