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Voted Off or Dismissed
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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I couldn't decide which title to use among other problems...I had during a recent stay in a psych unit...

 

Voted Off or Dissmissed
 
Misty haze of chemicals
Stuck where I didn’t want to be
Grumpy and disgruntled, wondered the hall
All for someone else’s prosperity
 
All I did was become a fly
Who died before the start of the party
So, authority didn’t let it get by
Just because I couldn’t invision a future lately
 
Rest? 
In a place of plastic silverware, no smoking, no fun
Watching inane TV with everyone
 
Couldn’t even take a book
It might contain hidden contraban
Strip searched, take a look
Locked away again
 
Voted off the looney bin for bad attitude
Complained and was ungrateful
Sutting up, I refused
So out the door, free and spiteful
 
So watch out world my future is clear
I will spread hate and discontent
Locked away, I grew really weird
Now I need anger management
 

 


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 Reviews of "Voted Off or Dismissed"
Reviewed by Pamela Murawski
Reviewed on January 17, 2009
You are funny! I take it this was the loony bin! Been there done that! This was enlightening to say the least. Pamela

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
This brought back the nightmare of remembering the turn of the lock as I said good by to someone very dear that I had to leave behind... Your poem brings light to a dark subject. Excellent piece. kgcummings... Kathy

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
I was sentenced to watch Jack Nicholson in Anger Management twice...somewhat fun show...at least I laughed a lot...but it doesn't sound like you're laughing much here, Liz. This is a very interesting write, but please due turn to humor and the uplifting when you can. Unfortunately your description of inane television is so very true... what happened to the Jack Benny's and the Red Skelton's who had the talent to make a laugh on the slightest turn. I don't totally want to be where I am at now, so you have my first-hand sympathy.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
I can relate to this because I was taken to such a place against my will once. I can empathize. I wish you the very best, Liz. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
This rings very true to me, Liz. I can see and feel it all. I don't feel so very far removed from this at the best of times, having had my childhood Sundays spent in one such unit, visiting my Dad. I, too, could never decide whether I was the grown up or the very unorthodox adults around me. And yes, anger management is a very real need to vent all such frustration sorrounding such experiences. Well said. xx

Reviewed on November 13, 2008
Liz,

A finely-penned poem - well done!!


Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 8, 2008
Taking one day and one thought at a time is the solution, Breathe deep and think before acting on anything in life. Smile lots and others will smile back Elizabeth. Take care.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 7, 2008
Liz,
I hope you are well. This one has me concerned because I know you've had a lot of stress lately. Well written, though, with a twist of humor throughout. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
Great write and the touvh of humor is a sweet add on.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 6, 2008
Locked away, I grew really weird,
Now I need anger management.

I felt that way in my job, so I retired, and now I feel fine.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
The beginning of the poem had me remembering standing in line to vote yesterday...for over two hours...
but I doubt that is what the poem is about.
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed on November 5, 2008
There has to be a metaphor somewhere but I'm missing it unless this is about drug use. Clue me in poet. I mean no disrespect. I just hate it when I don't "get" a poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
Either title still leaves me in the mist;) not sure if this is fact or fiction...Whichever, it's well done!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on November 5, 2008
Elizabeth,

Hopefully this is fictional ... very well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 5, 2008
Oh so cute Elizabeth, you writes are so adorable. This one is no Exception...well done Liz. Love, Bonnie


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