I refer not to Harbor Police scenes, nor to Hooters waitresses in a swimming pool, nor to objects in the toilet. No, it's those little things we occasionally observe in our view that can become very large and very pesky if we fail to exercise due care of our eyes.
That is a really well-written stanza. I love how you took such a unique subject matter and really made us see the floaters ourselves, and you didn't use tired word choice, either. Good stuff- Michelle
I've had floaters I think, I've stopped floating when I stopped doing acid trips...quite sometime ago but seems like only yesterday...hope your eyes find peace...Ed
OH I hate those things. Have had them for years (due to extreme myopia). You capture them well in these rhyming lines and make us "see." :) Well done, Leland.
The power of the pen to transform the challenges of physical being into literary creation is an extraordinary thing indeed. With FLOATERS we get to learn, laugh, and appreciate all at once.
Ouch. You cannot know what this means to me, Leland. I have had four eye operations in my life. One of them was for retinal detachment in both eyes. If not for the quick response of the opthalmologists, I would be blind. I know all about "floaters." I've gotten used to living with their annoying presence. Sometimes, they seem to get "into a tizzy" and like to be noticed. Thank you for this. I'm quite sure many will relate. Love and peace,
Re-Release! No longer back-listed. Return to the Olde Ways. The hustle and bustle of modern day life has brought many of us to a quick fix attitude.This book is for those of you who are fed up; have looked at your life and your loved ones and realize
Like local dark matter interstice —
Curtain my soul’s faded windows,
So clear views I’ve come to miss.
That is a really well-written stanza. I love how you took such a unique subject matter and really made us see the floaters ourselves, and you didn't use tired word choice, either. Good stuff- Michelle
Edwin
Hope yours will get better soon!!
Love Tinka
I always thought floaters were those things we left in the toilet when we eat right, ;-)
Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Aberjhani
Regis