As I look within me and beyond all animations I gathered the conflicts of your retaliations I watched within these eyes of mind beyond the darkness, in a space of mine
How can wants, take, and hand a child their strife When their arms explode the innocent life? Their surface reveals all offspring traditions while their legs stand on tables of contradiction
I looked in the mirror, A RAW reflection
My eyes can see each proud demonstration And their flags still wave in songs of nations Mock and mimic, O’ bloodless tongue! I can hear now, how your bells have rung
The guns will blast in postulate chatter While nations recline in their lipid matter Someone, up there, must have turned out the light For dawn now darkens our early light
I looked in the mirror, A RAW reflection
Now, an image reflected, when I looked straight at me But,we can’t see behind all the worlds vanity The straightedge will shorten, in lengthy a rage So all pray for wisdom from our Omniscient sage
Stay within and surround, one world of peace Don’t look in the mirror with such furrowed crease. Shovels only dig greed and bury us more
I looked in the mirror and I saw WAR
copyright 2006-2007 Kimmy Van Kooten
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Reviews of "A RAW Reflection"
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Amazing work here Kimmy, Hugs, Laura
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Wow...what a tremendous poem. Your choice of words and the emotion you convey are remarkable. Good job, poet!
Elizabeth
Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
kimmy I can see the RAW reflection of WAR. Well done.
Chrissy
Elizabeth
Chrissy