"...I feel nothing
not anything,
Not a damn thing, under my feet...
The wide open field of a soon to be... harvested wheat Sways before me as far as an eye can see, maybe even farther...
I take a deep breath and gulp... Then a little more, now I’m sure, there will be enough air in my store
I’m off and running in my fastest’est sprint; My legs never knew?, this faster, so swift... Now the shafts becoming, a burnt orange blur
I feel nothing not anything, Not a damn thing, under my feet... suspended, with my arms like flapping, saying, Wow, this is so unbelievably, sweet...!
The wind is against me now, airing, beneath my limbs Thinking to myself, "Wow... I can breathe!" floating, above meadows and trees, in wing
Turning in a left, then right, directional flight now, just enough... Feeling this, seemingly... cleansing my slight
Above the world, I soar in awe like a bird in the sky, I want to call... Shout to anyone, "Fly here with me, into the clouds!" Here me back, when I sing out loud...
Looking down and around ...now above the ground Looking far and wide spirting in His sky I’m so light right now, whispering..."God, I love to fly!"
"Is there anyone up here?" And to my surprise... There pulling up next to me was a pilot...smiling He just waved at me with a great big grin
So I summoned back, lifting my flap and then I fell flat on my head right out of my bed! Dag-nabbed, I hate getting up!"
Copyright December 2006 Kimmy van kooten
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Reviews of "Don't Wave Back!""
Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2006
Too cute!! I felt light as a feather til that flap lost my flight. Back to reality, it was fun while it lasted!! Muah!!
Yes had to return to earth...into the real
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart.....
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Yes, dreams can feel so real, we don't want them to end sometimes. Must have felt awesome to be able to fly, even if only in a dream. Super write Kimmy. Hugs, Laura (By the way, it's not cold up here, only about 32degrees!lol..
Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2006
beautiful dream.Beautiful poetry Thanks Kimmy
Love
Chrissy
Hi Kimmy, so you fly in your dreams too! Yes, it's an amazing feeling...the breeze in your face, zooming upwards at great speed...on I've done a few of those solo flights too. Like you, I didn't like when they ended. :)
God Bless
Love, Lena
(Thanks for coming along on my "digs". :)
I was about to ask if I could have some of whatever it was you took ... then I saw your ending and realized it was a dream! What a fun poem, Kimmy! I enjoyed this!
Love,
CJ
Oh, dear Kimmy, I just love this! Reminds me of a dream I used to have about running over great expanses of water, and getting lighter and lighter, until my feet touched only the air... It was an amazing feeling... which would also usually end up with a jolt - either the alarm clock blaring, or a glass of water knocked from the bedside table all over the sheets... LOL! This is brilliant poetry, with a marvelous use of imagery and humour. What a delightful combination!
Love,
Alexandra*
next time grab the silver chord tighter and wear a psychic parachute ;) seriously, dreams are the magic of the soul ... i like you verve and the direction you took this poem ...
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2006
You been watching the snowman lol..Icarus come back down to earth...
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Yes had to return to earth...into the real
Thank you for sharing,
From the Heart.....
Love
Chrissy
God Bless
Love, Lena
(Thanks for coming along on my "digs". :)
Love,
CJ
Brett
well done!!
love Tinka
this is a brilliant write
Thank for the scenic tour
of your wonderful flight fantasy
and the lovely imagery
Love & Peace
William
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Chrissy
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