Walking Along the Trails... (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 11, 2007

"There are new gifts waiting here to be opened
with precision, grace and nobility
The trees kiss me goodnight as I inhale their redolence."
Breathtaking indeed~thank you much for sharing this wonderous write.

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2006

"There are new gifts waiting here to be opened"! You have those gifts! My favorite so far, I don't know why~ Maybe because I was able to relate so strongly. I became the narrator almost instantly, thinking about MY Love, never questioning, accepting the challenges as fuel to the fire~ exciting. It keeps me on my toes, never guessing, ~so satisfied.
XoXo, Mara

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

Waffle-stomper treads with positive affirmation in between each cleat, Kimmy. Walking Along the Trails is a climb up the poetic kiva ladder and your poetry is balanced on the top rung...Blessed Be...

Sage

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

Pleasantly optimistic, Kimmy.

Brett

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

True true true, a most refreshing drink of life....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

Most outstanding write Kimmy!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

Seems as though you have written a great metaphor for a successful relationship Kimmy.
Rusty

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 18, 2006

A marvelous walk along the trail of life, Kimmy.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

The trails of life are never alone...and you express this well within your poem...

nice.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Beautiful offering my friend...you've penned a very inspiring and uplifting poem that allows the reader to see your positive attitude toward someone very special while also reminding us that even though life hands us some tough obstacles that we must face and conquer and with a positive attitude and love in our heart we can overcome and make it...great offering we need more positive people in the world.
Merry Christmas and God Bless,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

A wonderful repost of this one Kimmy the ending is excellent.
many Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Wonderful write

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Kimmy,

You have done wonders with this one. Great job!!!!!

I wish you all the wonders of a Merry Christmas and the Happiest New Year!!!!! May God bless you always!!!!!

Lots of love,
Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Your write the story of a life-partner here, Kimmy, and you write it well. If everyone took such a positive view of the obstacles that face a marriage or partnership and understood that together they could move mountains, there would be a lot less unhappy relationships and divorces in this world. This is an inspiring and uplifting poem...a keeper to be sure.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Brathtaking write Kimmy, I could almost feel your dreamy change of thought as if you were here in person reciting this poetry of love, desire and foreverness. Very well done and the heart to whom you wrote this for is rich indeed in your love.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

I don't know what the original was like but this one is perfect

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

Sounds very peaceful.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

wwwoooooowwwwwwwwww...this was one of your best Kim...Love YOU!!!!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on December 17, 2006

This is lovely...I felt as if I was walking along too. Good job!