As life pours down on us, know you are never alone...Listen!...
Just like the tears... that fell from the sky Sadness downpours from my makers eye Hearts break a look at rage Desire drops of plenty A waterfall!
Just like the tears... left upon my pillow Shame silently seethes like a weeping willow Spirits pray show your stay Temptations pride of place A cascading grace!
Just like the tears... gentle drops on the earth Nature reservoirs of secret thirsts Seeds burst the living drink Life creation brinks A fountain overflow!
Just like the tears... rain sounds from the heavens Hate orates a seething soul Divine One sings condescending songs Love dew drops of angels lashes Heavens open up!
Copyright October2006 Kimmy Van Kooten
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Reviewed by Chris Fitzgerald (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
Bravo! I certainly know when life rains I feel the comfort and the peace of God's love. Kimmy it is the poetry you write and I read that keep me reminded of this. Thank You Chrissy
PS: Like Tamara said, "You Rock"!!
Kimmy Van Cuttie what am i going to do with you? You and your little radar picking up signals from miles around, hey what's the martians doing? anyway poem is great and i hope the heavens do open up
Hi Kimmy, Perhaps what Sandie says is true. That would explain the increase in hurricanes etc. Out world sure is full of sin and pain! This indeed is in inspired write, much deeper than we think! Well done!
The emotions in your heart are strongly told by your words Kimmy
Rusty
Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2007
This is an award-winning write! Rejoice! I loved reading this. The title intrigued me to click. I pictured the rain, falling, drip dropping down your words. From the heavans to the pillow to the dirt...and on down, down. Keep it up ;X You rock! XoXo ~Tamara
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PS: Like Tamara said, "You Rock"!!
love and peace, Carole
"Just Like the Tears..."
Simply heartfelt and also have reasons to
believe it could be true. It is wonderful to read
your spiritual writes too Kimmy.
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Not profound.
The sound of God
Is all around.
Yes, dear Kimmy, we are never alone. God is everywhere.
Hugs Angela
Blessings come from the sky, in beautiful, effective verse: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Nature
reservoirs of secret thirsts
Seeds burst
the living drink
Life
Marvelous!
Blessings,
Joyce B...
An inspiring, wonderful spiritual singing, "Just Like the Tears..."
enchants the soul and stimulates respect to Nature.
Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love tinka
George
Well done.
Georg
Brett
Beautiful work of art in these verses.
Your talent soars!
Blessings and Love,
~Linda
God Bless
Love, Lena
Rusty
Sandie Angel :o)