The moment a woman marries, some terrible revolution happens in her system; all her good qualities vanish, presto, like eggs cut out of a conjuror’s box.
‘Tis true that they appear on the other side of the box, but for the husband they are gone forever. BULWER
In naked bed a nude contract On admiral’s watch asleep o’er hack
Aforcing nay no two, too bare I kissed good night drunk’ n skilly stares
It nipped me dreamt Ay, life at rest Old hens sit high on love’s empty nests
Slovenly walking, dabbling wet Undressed me then, In a blink, I let
Young in soft But nay, dear little eyes Stilled, skill a cap’ n blighters A white flag waves bide
In penny wisdom, unsullied sense Prize in mind No matter what’s spent!
For in the quaff, Sippin’ sups in bed Time n’ tides clothe off, Where abeyance doth ebbs
Pluck in feathers Wanton a wile, wills sail Nay Ole'Bulwer, everything goes Yea, before I bale!
Wow this is a very profound write
Nude contracts wow that grab my attention
and pull me into every word!!
this is awesome thoughts and a lot of
Truth to this write!!
I truly enjoyed this poem!!
Love And Peace to you Always..Morning Star
I used to sing Rocky Racoon to my then girlfriend before we got married. That stopped. I used to buy her freschua? flowers. That stopped - well, have you seen the price these days? I used to be clean shaven. This stopped too - my chin goes red when it sees a blade. As for bed? We still sleep with each other, have done for over 30 years, but we just wish each other 'Goodnight' now:)
Aye, aye, aye. Marriage is a double album by the way, I haven't shared what my wife used to do and has now given up...
Enjoyed the rapport that this poem triggered.
Dai
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Didn't understand a blasted thing! Oh well, (kidding) lol, You've got one clever mind Kimmy! love holly
Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2007
Kimmy I love the frist two lines, they just pull you into this poem. It really was kinda sad, to think what could have been and all too often is not.
debra
Kimmy,
When I read this I thought this woman is traveling a ship in the bed of a number of men, till she find a port for another adventure.
I thought the poem was great.
Kimme Von Cuttie, I love you too, did i use the right amount of "o's"
I guess you'll keep me straight on that too. Hey what about the "H" I missed in whether, I spelled it wether, oh well. Bulwer's, I really learn a lot of new words and meanings from you my dear or thanks for the new additions to the dictionary. Here's one I created, "aswego."
Meaning as we go. Your poems a riot
The gist of this poem is insightful, and your inspired vernacular is always a pleasure. I come away from reading you feeling like I have eaten a great meal. I believe, Kimmy, that you have one of the most unique muses I've ever read. Blessings to you!
Light and Wisdom
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
enjoyed very much...
Have a great day!
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Kimmy,
The notes above are so true I like your creative way of brings truths out in a raw slice of lifes moments....
With men I think it is the conquering thing they have built in them do you????
"Nude contracts..." Now if that doesn't grab you...and draws the reader in for a rollickin' good romp! I love this one, wanted to dance the reel! Well done!!
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
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Nude contracts wow that grab my attention
and pull me into every word!!
this is awesome thoughts and a lot of
Truth to this write!!
I truly enjoyed this poem!!
Love And Peace to you Always..Morning Star
Aye, aye, aye. Marriage is a double album by the way, I haven't shared what my wife used to do and has now given up...
Enjoyed the rapport that this poem triggered.
Dai
debra
Peace Be with you
William
Very clever, indeed!
Love, Rhonda
So good!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
When I read this I thought this woman is traveling a ship in the bed of a number of men, till she find a port for another adventure.
I thought the poem was great.
I guess you'll keep me straight on that too. Hey what about the "H" I missed in whether, I spelled it wether, oh well. Bulwer's, I really learn a lot of new words and meanings from you my dear or thanks for the new additions to the dictionary. Here's one I created, "aswego."
Meaning as we go. Your poems a riot
love tinka
Light and Wisdom
Have a great day!
The notes above are so true I like your creative way of brings truths out in a raw slice of lifes moments....
With men I think it is the conquering thing they have built in them do you????
Peace,
josie
Hugs Angela
"Nude contracts..." Now if that doesn't grab you...and draws the reader in for a rollickin' good romp! I love this one, wanted to dance the reel! Well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I want a girl waiting in every port!
Good description and keep the clothes off.
Well done.
Georg
Each verse is beautiful and definitely see worthy.
Love,
CJ
Fee
Be safe,
Karen