I was licking on a ‘cicle, lapping in the know
How supple is the sun in winter, keeling off the snow!
With squinty eyes, a cordial sigh; Seasonally substantial
A saying shimmer savvy sheen'd
"O’ Winter’s beneficial!"
While freezing in the shadows, fitted, close to death
No fluffy covers, just, sheeted white, stripped to lay to rest
When everything is gone, in blue, your dying. . .
Let care compel, feel, ice will melt . . . my Winter ‘cicles’ crying!
. . .and, look... the evergreens’ surviving!
Turning back, alas!. . . I’m standing in array
Lights upon my ‘cicle, dripping down, dismayed
Wet and cold; my lips feel numb
blue ‘cicle thoughts will soon succumb. . .
Watch fire Mantles, O’ such a cold bum!
Mister Winter that is!
Kimmy Van Kooten
Copyright 2008
nice work Kimmy...
Profound words...
I love the cadence of this poem.
love the photo too...
Cryssa
Ron
Be safe,
Karen
Your alliteration, your word-loving strokes of sound-alphabet, your 'Winter' breath of mind-write subtlety, yankingly, provoke emotions of winter's starvation! Not its own, whomever lived it, Winter, and miss its shades, hues and tints! An exquisite write which holds so many levels of memories of all, it almost hurts!
The photo? Gorgeous! I see at least three worlds in its blueness, its iciness, its beauty...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Love Tinka
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Love,
ET
Blessings,
Joyce B.
If not, then you need to look to nature for the answers. . .
I couldn't agree more, but I truly wish more would look.
fee
Georg
excellent...
John
Plus, snuggling feels better when the weather is cooler/colder.
God bless you. Kathy
Ted
Beautifully written and imaged; brava, Kimmy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Snow flurryin' out there as we speak! Yes! Snow in Texas!! Yeehawww!! :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.