Laser Tag Under Cataract Moons (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Laser Tag Under Cataract Moons
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To perform surgery on a soul, one must first, see clear, the images of their influence, in order to excise on the damaged parts! Kimmy Van Kooten

Dismal of a night Weathering and insights! The drive . . . long and winding I can barely see! My sights, blinding, under this cataract moon. . . I suppose I stand out as a haze now? . . . her clouded thoughts running a maze, How? Since when does any fog settle at night? So, where are your white lines when you need them? "Should I un kiss my hem?" (. . . Traveling alone and still, it mattered . . . hmm?) If it were a clear night she’d be even more scattered! ...but, in all the outside obstacles! Eyeing, with her prescribed spectacles . . . yet, still squinting for that even sharper image! (. . . anything to distract a spirit’s whisper!) So soft, and barely audible. . . Sounds, I find we mimic to ourselves. . . Over and over! Like never-ending echoes! Of some, long ago lost memory of the last cataract moon! . . . and the one before that one, and that one . . . and that. . . They’ve learned our tides, I tell ya! All amid, like wafture, waving at us bobbing. . . within our spiritual weaknesses. . . it seems And they keep rising up so much more often, lately! "Laser tag . . . You’re it!" (Wow! I can see clear to her Hell and back now!) Copyright 2009 Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

I can see clearly the humor in your fog.

Ron

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2009

Oh my Kimmy, you've done an awesome job with this one...you are one smart cookie! Love Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 16, 2009

Graphic image and verses complement one another very effectively to give the reader pause for reflection. Thank you, Kimmy. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Ageripping tale indeed and the image of the cateracets and what it must be like to all of a suden see your best images but also your worst fears clear from the haze...wow.

Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

To perform autopsy on a soul...oops! digressing, LOL
My sight has been diminishing because the damn lenses are getting not tight anymore and forced +5.5 to read anything less that ten feet fat letters! but because of my age they told me that out there wasn't anything more to see than I haven't seeing already, soooooooo.........

Georg

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Intriguing with every envisioning word into the canvas of your wonderful photo
The horizons golden glow looks awesome too
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie