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Concentration
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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Am I tired or burnt out?

 



I sat down to ponder,
wanting to write;
to remember.
My  mind began to wander.
What will become of me,
when I become eighty-three?

Louisa A Dobbins
 


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 Reviews of "Concentration"
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Well, why worry about it, just enjoy life as it comes. If one reaches eighty three it is cause for celebration, not concentration! Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
You sound like the rest of us Louisa, I often wonder the same thing myself.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
When you're 83 you'll look forward to 84. And the best thing about it will be that you're not 94! Well done! Makes people think.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
For some reason, dear Louisa, this reminded me of the old Beatles song, when I'm Sixty-Four. Hopefully, when you're 83, dear heart, the Bride will be in Heaven with her Lord. Amen and Amen!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Crosswords, number games, writing, all improve the ole grey matter at any age...Though my mind never stops wandering, huh oh yeah as i was saying, bad weather for this time of year, nice thingy, thingymajig...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Your breathing thats what matters,stay well,safe hugs

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 25, 2007
Now that I'm 83 I've long since stopped wondering. All I know is I've got to lose some weight if I'm ever going to make 84.


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