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Louisa A Dobbins

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Feedback
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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The feedback is all some of us have. It is healing. It also encourages some of us to (think) give feedback.

I thought I could write
until I joined Authors Den
I have'nt be so insulted
since I don't know when.

These people are pros
a GED can't keep up with them.
I won't quit trying, this
gives me something to do

I'm gonna make a liar
out of the devil,
who says I'm 100% disabled
word from hades...liar, liar.

You all keep writing
I will write and read
You are my teachers,  I truly love
the feedback  you give.


 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Feedback"
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Sweet Louisa!
Keep on Writing, as we all know writing is GREAT Therapy!
and they become treasures of the HEART!

WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passions, SHEExooo

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Practice makes perfect, Louisa.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Positive feedback is always nice. It is my experience that most of the people at AD, especially the poets, are cordial and uplifting with their feedback. However, there are a few who seem to enjoy flinging the negative words they pick up on icanimprovemylimitedvocab.com. They are fodder for laughter.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
And you keep writing, because your words are like hidden jewels that once uncovered dazzle all of us.

Cheers,,

Dan


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