End of an Affair and Oreos
You were button-down shirts, designer ties and Gucci loafers
I'm Levis, cowboy boots and T-shirts
You we're dinner at fine restaurants, the opera and Chopin
I'm anything take-out, walks on the beach and mellow jazz
You we're lobster thermidor, chocolate souffle and cappuccino
I'm pizza, ice cream cones and ice-cold beer
You we're upward mobility, state-of-the-art and cutting edge
I'm happy with now, anything that works, and old is comfortable
You we're the Wall Street Journal, USA Today and Time magazine
I'm this week’s best seller, magazines for writers, and anything by Stephen King
You we're ski trips to Aspen, reservations for a suite, and first-class airfare
I'm walks in the countryside, nature, and long drives with no destination
You always drank the last of the milk and hoarded the cookies.
I now have plenty of milk and my very own Double Stuf Oreos.
© Marcia Miller-Twiford
A comparison that dazzles . . . sparkle on!!
Best wishes,
Lance
luv,
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Georg
This pairing was black/white, total opposites, a living oreo. Had you stated this openly in your poem, it would have been trite. But you did not; you allowed your reader to grasp this -- and that is what makes you a great writer.
A toast to plenty of milk and oreos :-)
Ted