I wrote this short poem as I sat quietly in the crowd that gathered for our town's annual homecoming parade. This poem is based on the life of a family whose success was built upon lies and deception and has recently been exposed through the media and the justice system...
I removed this poem for copyright purposes as it will appear in my upcoming book. Sorry for the inconvenience...and as always thanks for stopping by my den!
Their seem to be one just like that every where in every town
even in the Burbs of East Cupcake USA
thanks for sharing Joyce
Peace & Love
William
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2007
Dear Joyce, success, when gained through lies and deception is no success at all, as you demonstrate here so effectively! Good observation in this piece and it teaches a good lesson!
~Butch Howard
Makes you want to be the FLY ON THEIR WALL! Great poem Lady "J"!
HOpe school and your days is going along beautifully! and you are finding PEACE! (Inner)
This GREAT poem reminds me, of things coming around! When you least expect it, YOU reap what yOu sow!
Sage words oh, wise one. You never know what goes on behind the closed doors. We all have secrets we would rather keep hidden. One can only hope that they are small. Reg is right they always get exposed. Great work here. Liz
So very profound and absolutely true! What goes around, comes around!
God forgive them, they see the light before its extinquished...FOREVER!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
A great write and you are write no one can live lies in search of satisfaction, for they will reap what they sew. Thank you Joyce for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Clever, concise and revealing Joyce. I have to take a moment to laugh here noting our similarities when comparing the places and times the muse strikes. I'm glad you used that waiting time wisely because this is sooo very good, my friend.
"reaping what they sew" is often the case of those who stray from the paths of honesty and decency. An interesting write that leaves us with the message that what goes round comes round.
Strong and brave lines. More and more such masks are being recognized for what they are and the truths they've hidden seem to be a big part of these "days of reckoning" in which we're currently living. Enjoyed the read tremendously.
Been there, suffered that! Great write!! <3 'Pea' <3
PS: Don't know about you, but I find reading well-done true
crime stories soothing. All that evil beneath the surface. All that sweetness and light above it. W o n't read 'em unless I know
justice was eventually done. Way too many people get by with murder. Literally and otherwise! Hope you don't mind my little rant. Hit a nerve!! Expect nearly everyone who reads this feels the same. Thank you for reminding me to continue to look for the good. . .and remember to watch my back! Keep the wagons in a
circle!! With respect, admiration, and gratitude, More'n Abit Wary
Good poem Joyce. I know of someone who got himself into a net and just confessed. He has disappointed many people. Not the same case of course. Things usually come out in the end. Well written.
This seem to be going around Quite a lot
lies cheat and hurt anyone for success
This a beautifully written poem.
Creative choice of words which
Provide with nice imagery
Excellent poetic view of thoughts!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you....Morning Star
We all truly reap what we sow, and how this often pains many souls.
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2007
Dear Joyce, I know of many who live like this and what's even worse they've actually convinced themselves they've done no wrong. "The rest of the world is at fault!" they say.
Great poem, blessings, Holly
This is good work. It says what is important. No one is accused. But, we know that every hamlet and small town has at least one family which qualifies. 'Tis sad, indeed, that money, land and kindness with charity to all, don't mix well. Is it the mean folks who make the money, or is it the mean money that makes them terrible? Have lived in 12 towns and cities, and found the same kind in all of them. I've given them a name...or disease...or brand of shame:
FLUMPS" ! ! !
F amily
L and
U pmanship
M oney
P osition
S mell
Their must be a special place where liars go who ruin reputations with slanderous tales which seems to make them feel big, but also I feel sorry for those that believe them, without checking if what they say is true and spread those lies.
Seems a lot of that going around, to be a success you have to play dirty, no matter who gets hurt. While those trying to earn an honest buck or are below the poverty line get screwed. :( Spot on perfection.
Yankee Doodle Daddy is a historical Appalachian Family Saga. The story follows a mother's reckoning as she struggles to survive and keep her four daughters alive.
Yankee Doodle Daddy is a historical Appalachian Family Saga. The story follows a mother's reckoning as she struggles to survive and keep her four daughters alive.
even in the Burbs of East Cupcake USA
thanks for sharing Joyce
Peace & Love
William
~Butch Howard
HOpe school and your days is going along beautifully! and you are finding PEACE! (Inner)
This GREAT poem reminds me, of things coming around! When you least expect it, YOU reap what yOu sow!
Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady SheCat Purrs...
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
God forgive them, they see the light before its extinquished...FOREVER!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Regis
Georg
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Love,
Taylor
Be safe,
Karen
Love Tinka
Aberjhani
PS: Don't know about you, but I find reading well-done true
crime stories soothing. All that evil beneath the surface. All that sweetness and light above it. W o n't read 'em unless I know
justice was eventually done. Way too many people get by with murder. Literally and otherwise! Hope you don't mind my little rant. Hit a nerve!! Expect nearly everyone who reads this feels the same. Thank you for reminding me to continue to look for the good. . .and remember to watch my back! Keep the wagons in a
circle!! With respect, admiration, and gratitude, More'n Abit Wary
lies cheat and hurt anyone for success
This a beautifully written poem.
Creative choice of words which
Provide with nice imagery
Excellent poetic view of thoughts!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you....Morning Star
Great poem, blessings, Holly
If it pleases you check out my short story "Lies and Deciet."
Walt
Oh! and what a terrible web they weave. No one can hide from the seeing eye. Bless You Always, Paul.
FLUMPS" ! ! !
F amily
L and
U pmanship
M oney
P osition
S mell
Been There - Done That. - Bill
Seems a lot of that going around, to be a success you have to play dirty, no matter who gets hurt. While those trying to earn an honest buck or are below the poverty line get screwed. :( Spot on perfection.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(