I think we all have them, those dreams, hopes, and desires that we do not share with others...I do! just a thought this beautiful Sunday morning from the mountains of Kentucky...
this poem has been removed as it will appear in my upcoming book
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Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2008
Gentle, sweet and poignant words. Hang on to your dreams!
I think it's so important to have dreams. Without them, we have nothing to work toward all our lives. This poem is beautifully written! I enjoyed reading it:)
Sheila
Soooooo beautifully written and expressed dreams
a stunning view of your
hidden treasures of dreams hope and desires!!
Absolutely beautiful ode !!!
Love Peace and hugssss.....Morning Star
Sharing dreams is hard for me. I sometimes think folks might think me foolish. So, I keep them inside me and one day they'll come into the light and oh will I be overjoyed that I finally gave them birth. In the meantime, I'll continue to carry them in my heart, until the time is right.
Thank you for this beautiful poem. Just what and when I needed it.
A beautiful write Joyce, Dreams are like our secret hide away. great write, our minds must be on the same track today as I am sure you noticed with my write. Thank you for sharing.
Sign me up, Dear Joyce.. I plead guilty to these and others, for dreams are what keeps us going in the right direction. I propose that you dream of my Georgia mountains... at least once a month, and I pledge to dream of your Kentucky mountains which you love so deeply. That way, all of these city slickers will have to eat their hearts out, right?????? Love, - Bill
Absolutely fantastic Joyce! Yes, you are so right. I know I have a few that I keep tending to and very quiety put them back where they belong, never to be shared. Such a heartwarming piece...
Joyce, we all have our little secrets tucked deep inside us and we dare not to share them with anyone. Some days these dreams can be so real that it takes us down a pathway of dreaming happiness. I truly enjoyed every line in this writing. Great!!!
Ahhhhhh! Great truth lies in your words of wisdom. My dreams are like my soul children--there to keep me motivated, to keep me actively involved with now and looking toward the treasures that tomorrow will bring. Wonderful write, Joyce.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
I think it's so important to have dreams. Without them, we have nothing to work toward all our lives. This poem is beautifully written! I enjoyed reading it:)
Sheila
a stunning view of your
hidden treasures of dreams hope and desires!!
Absolutely beautiful ode !!!
Love Peace and hugssss.....Morning Star
Myrna
Love, Christine
Thank you for this beautiful poem. Just what and when I needed it.
Kathy
Beautifully penned.
Georg
Newfie Hugs, Rose
a nice though through poem...
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Be safe,
Karen
Wonderful write,
God Bless,
Lew
Regis
Walt
Peace,
Dan
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
stan
A most beautiful write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.