Little village.........
There is a little village,
nestled snugly in a bubble.
No window grates or door locks,
never any sign of trouble.
Majestic mountains face the east,
a tranquil lake sits to the west,
In between are tall pine trees,
all looking their very best.
A double decker village,
complete with homes, parks and shops.
If you look real close,
you will see, birds in those tree tops.
A magical place of dreams gone by,
of a life style that exists no more.
Men tip their hats, ladies give a smile,
children play endlessly by the lake shore.
Some standing on a platform,
with umbrellas, bags and canes.
No need, they are in a very safe place,
Always sunny, it never, ever, rains.
A tiny train equipped with smoke,
is traveling click clack, click clack.
It goes up and down and all around,
but always, it keeps coming back.
This placid little village,
rests on a table comfortably.
Reminding me of a time and place,
Savored in my memory.
Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photograph by:
Robert Palumbo
3/28/2007
© All rights reserved
Charming and so lovely . . . exceptionally penned by your poetic talent!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance
Bountiful in beauty and message... "Little Village*" leads the reader's thought to wonderful childhood places... This is an outstanding composition in poetic excellence.
In appreciation and gratitude,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Vaya con Dios
Hank
Jane
Thank you Karen.
Abdullahi
Unique Different Write From you....
TRASK
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Excellent piece beautiful Imagery
And Flow Enjoyed this view of thoughts!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
of a life style that exists no more.
Makes me truly wish that these idyllic places still really existed in our mad modern world today.
Love,
CJ
A charming, peaceful place to call home.
Well done.
Georg
eileen
Regis
Nostalgia in beautiful lines: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *stay safe*
Beautiful write; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D