The Kids AT The Park (poem) by Victoria Taylor Murray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 29, 2006

WELL WRITTEN AND AGAIN ANOTHER PLEASURABLE AND MEANINGFUL READ. I LOVE CHILDREN.

Reviewed on January 18, 2006

Me, too!! Thank goodness you and I and a lot of our friends and cohorts at Author's Den have learned to treasure the children inside ourselves {& let 'em out to p l a y}, as well as the live-&-kickin-&-throwin'-&-skippin'-&-singin'+++++
darlin's it is our privilege to watch at play. <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on April 3, 2004

This was wonderful!
I have missed reading you!

Reviewed by Donald Iarussi (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2004

reminds me of the days in the park on arthur avenue in the Bronx.

I spent a good aprt of my childhood there

Reviewed by Eddie Thompson

Reviewed on February 6, 2004

When I was a kid we would play out in the piney woods along the many slues and creeks that meandered through our world. We turned an abandoned mill into a fort and had the time of our lives. Thanks for reminding me of that this day.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on December 25, 2003

nice thoughts on the strength of youth Victoria. love and cheers G

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on December 24, 2003

Oh, if only I half their energy! A very good write, Victoria. You put me right there in the park with you. ~~Bonnie Q
Associate Editor, Washington
Waltsan Publishing, Texas

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on December 14, 2003

Victoria I Loved this write !

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

Parks are one of my favorite places also, Victoria...and kids are a blast to watch.
Your work here captures that overflowing energy and innocence...well done.

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2003

An excellent write Victoria. Very beautiful.
Greetings and Blessings.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

Oh boy this poem hit the nail on the head. I just posted a poem Each Day An Adventure which brought me back to when I was a kid romping around. Love your write.

George

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 28, 2003

they inspire!!!
or make you tired!

lol

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Cute write! ;)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

You say it so well. The child in each one of us yearns to run in the park after reading your lines. Thank you.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

Excellent read I enjoyed ...

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

This one was so enjoyable.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on October 19, 2003

..beautiful tribute to the children ..I only wish we could still look at the world as they do...
Thankyou,

Vesna

Reviewed by Patrick Talty

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Nice one, Victoria.
Believe it or not, I've met people who actually don't like kids and who refer to them in contemptuous terms, such as "ankle biters."
Maybe people like that should walk in the park more often, particularly on a sunny Spring day when its ambience is made more joyful by the presence of kids at play! Or, alternatively, they should get the experience vicariously by reading this charming, evocative poem.

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

if only we could bottle that energy

this was a fun read
it also seemed to have a sense of foreboding realizing not only good people view the Kids at the Park and watch them before dark-

thanks,
donna.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Victoria, this reminds me of when I used to take my kids to the park! The energy and the activity was unending, and we always had fun! Thank you so much for this simple reminder..... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Lovely poem, bound to bring forth smiles, Victoria. Yes, I enjoy being in the park too...

Gina

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

Thank you for the sounds of children! Great write.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 18, 2003

So do I...children in parks are an inspiring sight to behold! Excellent write, I enjoyed the read...~Z~