There's a riddle in life I've yet to discern,
The flesh of thy soul I have tasted with condiment,
I Have seen through your eyes, felt your cries of how a world lives and dies; O minstrels of minutia.
You have filled my dusty screen with bites that scream;
Me too!
I hear thee.
Searching the cavernous conscious for cause & caveat,
Articulating with the heart of a hierophant,
Often sentimental, at times inconsequential, yet always a festival,
Singing venemous verse or emotional epitaphs,
Hoping for a rise or perhaps to'baptize' with word thought & deed.
I hear thee
Give me your words you impetuous scribe,
The open invitation to thine hearts imagination,
We shall taste your essence with a califlour ear,
Young old, savy or bold, it matters naught.
I will still hear thee
I'm no poet (obviously), but a teller of tales seeking inspiration,
I am but a leach on your vessal of virtue,
I beseech thee to express thyself uninhibitedly,
So loosen thine lips and quack thou query,
If yee bare no witness still you're better for it!
So all will hear thee...
H.J.Cruz
2/17/07
The idea makes me slightly nervous....so nahhhh
Nice write, you may not be a poet, but you are certainly a wordsmith...smarty.
Often sentimental, at times inconsequential, yet always a festival,
We shall taste your essence with a califlour ear,
What a treat to read for any poet who often feels crazy and inarticulate in his words, afraid no one will understand. Not only is this work a testament to poets but also to those who read us.
Kathy
As long as you write, I will still hear thee, too. What a beautiful tribute to poetry and the poets who write it! Thank you. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
this is WRITING!!!!!!!!!
Regis
"Hear Thee"
"I beseech thee to express thyself uninhibitedly"
The utmost in subliminal beauty..keep steppin'
Gotcha' smile and take care along with many blessings too!
From the Heart of an Artist...
Take a bow! This was truly heard!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Yes you are a story teller, and as a story teller you are a poet.
Georg
randy
But as for me, I'm still laughing at your very humours write! You! Yes You, are one fantastic writer! And a poet, yes you be! Don't undrestimate your talent young man, 'cause by God, you've got it!!!! Holly
You certainly hear well, for classical words fill Your lexis, and You know wisely how to place them. "I Hear Thee" is pure aroma of art and knowledge.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU