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I Hear Thee
by H J Cruz → (All Poetry by H J Cruz)
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In appreciation for your efforts!

There's a riddle in life I've yet to discern,
The flesh of thy soul I have tasted with condiment,
I Have seen through your eyes, felt your cries of how a world lives and dies; O minstrels of minutia.
You have filled my dusty screen with bites that scream;
Me too!
I hear thee.


Searching the cavernous conscious for cause & caveat,
Articulating with the heart of a hierophant,
Often sentimental, at times inconsequential, yet always a festival,
Singing venemous verse or emotional epitaphs,
Hoping for a rise or perhaps to'baptize' with word thought & deed.
I hear thee


Give me your words you impetuous scribe,
The open invitation to thine hearts imagination,
We shall taste your essence with a califlour ear,
Young old, savy or bold, it matters naught.
I will still hear thee


I'm no poet (obviously), but a teller of tales seeking inspiration,
I am but a leach on your vessal of virtue,
I beseech thee to express thyself uninhibitedly,
So loosen thine lips and quack thou query,
If yee bare no witness still you're better for it!
So all will hear thee...


H.J.Cruz
2/17/07

 


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 Reviews of "I Hear Thee"
Reviewed by nancy weston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
Shall I reply in mere short verse?
The idea makes me slightly nervous....so nahhhh

Nice write, you may not be a poet, but you are certainly a wordsmith...smarty.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Another Thinker write! You capture your reader with mirth, intelligence and a flexing of your scholarly knowledge! BE SWEET SC

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on May 6, 2007
"I'm no poet (obviously)" -- are you kidding?

Often sentimental, at times inconsequential, yet always a festival,

We shall taste your essence with a califlour ear,

What a treat to read for any poet who often feels crazy and inarticulate in his words, afraid no one will understand. Not only is this work a testament to poets but also to those who read us.

Kathy

Reviewed on April 27, 2007
H,

As long as you write, I will still hear thee, too. What a beautiful tribute to poetry and the poets who write it! Thank you. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Fantastic write......M

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Ohhhhhh
this is WRITING!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Loving the expressive words in this and yes, you are a poet! Theresa.

Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Huh? What'd you say? I couldn't hear you! LOL Just teasing! Such a great write for someone who is 'no poet'! I think we all disagree with you on that point! :)

Reviewed on April 24, 2007
I have to differ with you HJ, about being a poet. This is outstanding poetic work. Some profound thoughts well penned.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
Sounds like wonderful poetry to me.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 15, 2007
I feel what you are expressing via your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 17, 2007

"Hear Thee"

"I beseech thee to express thyself uninhibitedly"
The utmost in subliminal beauty..keep steppin'

Gotcha' smile and take care along with many blessings too!
From the Heart of an Artist...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
"I Hear Thee" echoing amid the humble, and she answers back, "...but I hear thee, also!
Take a bow! This was truly heard!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
This is very well expressed Cruz.

Reviewed by Tom Kitt
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
Poet thou be, my friend. Tom

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
impetuous scribe. That discribes all poets as they write. It is the changing of many words to appeal to the conformity of those who think they know how poems should appear. It's in the direct passage sent forth though us that connects with the souls that are meant to read it. Lady J

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
..."singing venomous verses or emotional epitaphs..." I told someone that, long ago, Beelzebub came for my sould and went away empty handed; that phrase moved me beyond your imagination.
Yes you are a story teller, and as a story teller you are a poet.
Georg

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 18, 2007
I enjoyed this ode to unlocking the Rosetta stone of mans virtues. Its a great write. If you are like me, I hardly sleep.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
Well done..HUgsssssss

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
Nicely written and a good, happy read.

randy

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2007
Hey guy, lighten up. Andre was as he is, perfect in his salute to you.
But as for me, I'm still laughing at your very humours write! You! Yes You, are one fantastic writer! And a poet, yes you be! Don't undrestimate your talent young man, 'cause by God, you've got it!!!! Holly

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

You certainly hear well, for classical words fill Your lexis, and You know wisely how to place them. "I Hear Thee" is pure aroma of art and knowledge.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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