In a cave under the natural promonotory over the waters of the sea, by Circeo, two lovers meet in glistening glee
She with golden glow of molten caramel he in beams of brazen bronze molding together creating a crimson blaze that in their shared concupiscence only coitus could sate, and so they mate
In joyous abandon they join in the sounds of the ocean mimicking it's motion delighting in the feast of delicious bites of connubial bliss as their lips kiss each others sites in this splendid night of nights
As the waters of wondrous pleasure circulate and creep into all the crevices that are open to them the foaming waves sprinkle a benediction over the couple embraced in loves finest glory blessing their story, the waters recede bearing their seed to commingle with all the other life in the sea
Beautiful Eileen, almost describing the way I feel at the moment, (new lady in life)our passion is like the sea (whoo-hoo!)a virtual Tusnami of love...Excellent.
Paul;-)
Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance
Reviewed on December 7, 2005
Why am I attracted to poetic writings lately? I don't know. I never was into poetry, but for some reason I want to rhyme lately and read others who do too..... I just left a poem of passion to come to yet another. Breath taking words etw. Thanks for sharing your passion.
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Carole...love and peace
Paul;-)
Mary Lynn Plaisance
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