Mold Me (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 4, 2006

I'm thirsty too Eileen...after reading this I am even thirstier,a warm seductive write.
It would be nice to have a someone so skilled mold one,but then...I think you have molded by a master artist already and he broke the mold after he made you Eileen.
Excellent writing.
Love from kay.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

You're already molded into perfection Eileen. Anymore and you'd have angel wings

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

A classy, sensual write Eileen...its warm in here!
love and peace...

Carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

What a great offering....thank you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Brilliant! This is fantastic way of showing intimacy to one you love. GBQ

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Rich in romantic and passionate overtones, the metaphor of the craftsman and the potter's wheel symbolises the skilful, loving and caring lover, who never rushes his work, but brings it to consummate perfection !
Beautiful pen Eileen
And a very expressive picture to convey the message !
Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Sensual honesty, Eileen. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Perfection from both perspectives.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Like a massage...

Ron

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Nicely said.
TX

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

In the hands of the right person, satisfaction guranteed.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

*er hm* Nordette clears throat. Okay, first Jude, now you. I really am going to need a cold shower. Do those work for women? ;-) Sexy poem, E.T. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Is it Hot in here or is me??????
Outstanding Write Eileen
ejoyed much

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Ooooh! Da poem glistens with sweat.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Demi Moore and Swayze in 'Ghost' scene here, Eileen. Put on the song 'Unchained Melody' and let your hands un-earth all the heavenly desires known to woman. A very Gaiaistic write here. An earthy fruition from sand to vessel passed through hand. Fits the mold!

Sage

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

Eileen, this is very sensual in its own way. I was entrolled with it.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

It absolutely IS mesmerising to watch a craftsman at work, Eileen, and you've captured the hypnosis so well, and within just a few deft-lined strokes. I had quite forgotten what it was like to watch a potter at work, but you have brought the whole process back to me.. especially, somehow, with that line "I am thirsty"... perhaps that's because of what I wrote for Poetry School yesterday which I am posting later... "Take me, break me, mould me, fill me..." do you know those words from a Christian chorus? Soothing, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

A very sweet write!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

enjoyed the read