snowbird kisses death when frozen trees cause life to freeze how lonely is the night mate left without flight nowhere to go and no friend to say hello the beauty of a snowy eve lost when left alone to grieve
This reminds me of when pipes freeze in our homes. It is a miserable situation to anyone who has ever had a pipe freeze and the snowbird must find this a paltry scene too. Spring is just around the corner though. Makes me smile at the thought of sunshine glistening on bird feathers. I love how the blue birds just sparkle.
I much prefer the warm curative sunshine and warmth Eileen to heat the bones and kindle the spirit
This is a touchingly sad and poignant piece that pierces your heart !
Peter
Had some snow there? They did in Jamestown, where Michelle Kidwell lives (she called us yesterday; but we missed her call due to working; but we called her after we got home). Excellent poem; as always, enjoy your words! BRAVA; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
love and peace...Carole
Love & Light,
Joseph
lost when left alone to grieve"
These lines are brilliant and sadly beautiful. An amazing poem, Eileen.
this to shall pass..
Vesna:)
Sage
Carmen
Love Tinka
Birgit and Roger
lost when left alone to grieve
Truly sad, and I can truly relate to this, this morning, Tiger Lily.
This is a touchingly sad and poignant piece that pierces your heart !
Peter
Sadness lingers in each word of this piece; very well expressed emotion in verse. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Had some snow there? They did in Jamestown, where Michelle Kidwell lives (she called us yesterday; but we missed her call due to working; but we called her after we got home). Excellent poem; as always, enjoy your words! BRAVA; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D