I slowly took the beam the sun
handed me and threw it across
the bow of the ship that was sailing
into the vibrant turquoise waters of
your cerebellum sea
Awash in the splendor of stimulating
thought, I sailed into the moodiness
of your matchless mind, knowing I
would find buried treasure more than
a benevolent booty
Invigorating phrases captured me while
verbs and nouns played tag with my
senses leaving me breathless as I tried
to keep up with the adjectives that made me dizzy
Seductive grey matter enticed my emotions with oceans of stimuli which caused a sweet syncopation that joined rhythm and rhyme to produce poetic fusion to the exclusion of
all banality
We sailed on in the misty moonlight of verse luxuriating in the indigo night as stars shone bright upon our muse to infuse a myriad of bliss from the kiss of our first collaboration on into infinity
eT
Ron
B&R
ejoyed your profound talent
Thanks for sharing
William
Love & Peace
Peace,
Carolyn
Regis
Oh yeah! Sweet and savory word buffet. I'm going back for seconds and thirds!
Peace,
B
The opening lines captivate and draw the reader into your journey...a most beautiful one, indeed. One of your best, thank you! Definately keeping. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Xxx dove
love and peace, Carole
I love it!
SUsan
You are a prolific woman that stays true to her craft!
Richard
thanks for sharing
love and peace
As always the imagery is vivid and your poetry well written.
love
Nicoletta
Paul;-)
You give us all much needed lightheartedness and levity of mind with this sassy and sparkling composition
You are at your best in this divine mood, and I love your choice of superb graphics...
Love and Light
Peter
My favourite stuff when you share your most recent poems.
They are worth taking time over..
Sherry always crasps poems so excellently...
Take care,
Sherry