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Fly in a Bottle
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Trapped in bottom
of empty coke bottle
the fly kept trying
to crawl to the top
wings got wet enough
to keep it from flying


Bottle on a picnic table
an ant tries to crawl up
keeps circling bottle until
it finally catches sticky part
crawls to top hesitates
is it wondering how it will
get the fly out of the bottle?


That's what it looks like
but wait, here comes more
ants who form a chain
when they reach the top
the other ant descends
then a few more follow


Fascinating to watch as
they pushed and pulled
the now dead fly up and out
marvel at how tiny  ants
have the ingenuity to do that
and we think we're clever


I ponder the question, is it instinct?


Doesn't instinct need a brain to know it?


Can you know to do something without a brain?


Why do humans lose the ability to communicate
when they are brain dead?


If we can't communicate without a brain
how do  ants do it?


Even if they have antennae that vibrate messages...


There must be something that makes them
understand the message...


We can't do everything  by instinct alone...


What say you?;-)


eT


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 Reviews of "Fly in a Bottle"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Oh ants have a brain, if a rudementary one. Eyesight and smell are finely tuned. Their instinct is programmed toward the group as a whole and they work in tandem to get the job done. On road trips when I was a girl, we'd sing "The Ants Go Marching" song. They're like little soldiers and as pesky as they are, their job is to clean up the waste of the world. As far as brain death is concerned, everything we are and do is in memory. The study of the brain is still in it's infancy and holds a real fascination for me, especially how humans have evolved from those first days of basic survival. Discovering fire, the developement of tools and the wheel, agriculture and the creation of villages as opposed to the nomadic lifestyle and the inventions that came from that, etc. All of this has increased our intelligence. The same evolution is seen in the insect world. Like the cockroach that hasvsurvived for eons and has developed a system that seems impervious to whatever poison we use to kill them. Sorry to ramble, Eileen, but you got me going here. It is in the questions that we find the answers. So much yet we have to discover and learn. Cool write...

Lin

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Interesting poem and questions, Eileen. And I like Lori's answer!

Reviewed on June 6, 2006
In every action all creatures do there is power of god in it which is passed to the doer by means of instinct or intution, as some people believe. Am I correct? Powerful poem. GBQ
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
Eileen

Eileen
Teamwork is a great thing, and when they are all working in unison together for the cause, even better..
Most creatures are instinctive, but have a telepathic understanding like Kate suggests, and then there is the very question of a soul....:)
Nature is the greatest of teachers !
Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 6, 2006
It is a lesson for all of us if we stick together all obstacles will be surmounted.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
Telepathy..............and we are just learning.

Great write :-)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
Wonderful questions. Perhaps people do not lose the ability to communicate when they are brain dead, perhaps we simply have not develped (or have lost) the ability to listen.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
Rufuz as well goes by instinct, his smell and hearing & eyesight are so much more attuned than ours, though I am good with my nose, I can tell when others do "stinct"...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
The great thing aboit this wonderful world is that man, who thinks he knows it all...actually knows very little and I think ants are the true master architects. Love this pic nic atmosphere and the march of the lowly ant who isn't.... <smile>
Susan

Reviewed on June 5, 2006
No matter what it is, it's team works that counts.
It's not the size of the brain that counts, it's the ability to think that counts.

Very interesting poem!

~ SMA ~


Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2006
Oh my gosh Eileen, the pesky darn things, lol.. And it seems like they have these marching boots on just a smilin' at us...
Wonderful write..

Xxx dove


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