Chimerical Wave (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 28, 2006

A wave of beauty, Eileen.
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KUDOS!

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

an delightful whimsy of transportal love ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

what a ride! everything works together - reasoned rhyme, fantastic imagery, metered magic. Dawn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Ravishing...like the wave.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Hiebner

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Beautiful
Lovely
Weldone

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Your imagination is limitless. "Chimeral Wave" is inspiring!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Outstanding write Eileen!!

Lovew Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Well done, love the picture

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

A tale done so well............. Imagery is very well expressed in this one.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

powerfully romantic. GBQ

Reviewed by S J (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Such beautiful lines throughout your poem, Eileen!
"A spiritual feast of close communication
Yielding the hope of intimate inspiration
Enmeshed in the vast blueness of sky and sea
Under intense overwhelming desires were we

Our dreamship became a vessel of love
Sailing the seas with its own treasure trove
Dropping anchor at the slightest whim
Enjoying an island or a moonlit swim"

Stunning poetry!

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

My dear minx, you worry me...these dreams swaying from the euphoric to the nightmarish...riding a chimera...hope you did not get hurt. And remember my momma always told me not to take sweets from strangers...but how deep are your imaginative powers? Superb poem as we come to expect from you. Victor

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

You can take us for the most wonderful rides in your ever growing imagination. You floor me with the extent of your vocabulary. Another suberb write with just enough of a hint of passion woven in.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

I love this stanza..
'Our dreamship became a vessel of love
Sailing the seas with its own treasure trove
Dropping anchor at the slightest whim
Enjoying an island or a moonlit swim'

Nice!!

Myrna

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

You pulled me along with this, seemingly, androgynous write. Well that is until the last line where your imaginary merman ravaged your booty. Goodness!

Love those words chimerical and evanescent.

Sugar Creek Chums ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Didn't know where you were going with this but you got there quite nicely. Nice finish.
Rusty

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Beautiful as usual!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Now that third paragraph is the ONLY way to travel...and doing so in your mind is even more wonderful...e & r

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Eileen,

I'm going to need a dictionary to see what Chimerical means...what ever it means, it sounds lovely! As is this write--gorgeous!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Stay safe with all the fires out y'all's way.....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Our dreamship became a vessel of love
Sailing the seas with its own treasure trove
Dropping anchor at the slightest whim
Enjoying an island or a moonlit swim

Now that's the way to sail!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

Wow Eileen

Very alluring and mysterious work here from your gifted pen..

I love this...and it is definitely a keeper for the archives..

Love and Hugs

Peter