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No Hocus Pocus
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We sat together under the setting sun
 He took my hands, did the wise one
Sitting across from me at a patio table
I was about to learn from a great fable

From a bowl of fruit he chose an apple and pear placed one in each of my hands, said,  "Close your eyes dear ,when you open them again look only at me, say which fruit is which, without looking to see"



He held my gaze captive with his mysterious eyes
And though I tried I couldn't tell,I was  surprised
I tried to concentrate, but I couldn't move the fruit
Not to feel the different shape, I had no way to dispute

I said " I'm amazed I can't tell,  it will only  be a guess 
 In the right the apple, in the left the pear, yes?"
Saying " See for yourself"   under his breath he did hum
Not only was I wrong,  the apple had become a plum

"But I saw an apple and a pear", I cried! what did you do?"
"When you closed your eyes I made the switcheroo
This is to show you two things my dear", said my sage guru
"The power of suggestion is where most choices brew"

"You must learn not to be distracted, but to keep your focus
Careful when you close your eyes, beware of hocus pocus
Learn to examine things fully, before you make your choices
Don't let yourself be lured away by too many other voices"


I learned from the Sage, to take more time
not let ourselves be had, the choices we make
in life are the difference between glad and sad
It could have been important life changing
items I was choosing,not knowing whether
it's plums or apples we will always
wind up losing.




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 Reviews of "No Hocus Pocus"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Brilliant allegory.
Using fruit instead of animals too.

Of course you have attained another level of insight here sugar chum, one which ministered to me. It is always good to know where one is in time and space, and also what one has been called to do. And then it is imperative that one minister to it diligently at all costs.

There are great consequences to not doing so.

Light and Wisdom and Love ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
I've had dreams where I could do telekinesis, i ws playing soccer in the dream too....
How many times do we say to ourselves, if only i had listened to my own intuition..

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
A very useful poem:
The choices we make in life are the difference between glad and sad.

Your poems are exceptional. This one is full of fun and wisdom.

Thank you.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Very insightful advice, Eileen. Enjoyed the reading while enhancing my awareness. Thank you!

Carmen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
interesting parable ... relying on our own instincts is always the best option ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Interesting write Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Eileen,

Very sound advice. Looking before you leap makes much sense.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Hi Eileen - do we make decisions when we sleep? may be may be not, but we act in the clear light of day - in your poem, i was confused as to who was holding the friut on first reading, which was interesting, hocus pocus! Nicky x

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Learn to examine things fully, before you make your choices
Don't let yourself be lured away by too many other voices"

I'd say The Sage gave you very sage advice, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed on March 30, 2007
When one accepts to "CLOSE her/his EYES" under command ~ the hypnotic trance takes action. The question would come: CAN ANYONE UNDER HYPNOTIC TRANCE MAKE ONE'S OWN CHOICES?

Two good lessons from "No Hocus Pocus" I have learned: Never accept a whole apple or any fruit from anyone ~inclusive relatives of any degree; and, ~ learn all I can to manage may day today.

I have enjoyed the reading of "No Hocus Pocus".

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
Ooooh I absolutely loved this - theme, meter and rhyme blend superbly into pertinent words of wisdom. My eldest has been reading some of Aesop's fables and this I have printed to share with him - of course you realise though that I will have to go buy plums and pears now Lady M! Love and hugs as ever, Imp ;)x

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
very enjoyable reading this experience

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
We do make our own choices, don't we? And by not choosing, we've made a choice too. Risk is the hardest part of living, that and not believing in ourselves. Love the message.

Love,
Bette

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Sagacious write that this cynic enjoyed :)

Edwin

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Sage nectar flows with a fusion of parable and reality...there will always be those who want what you have, and through hocus pocus will try to take it from you...coyly, they disguise what it is they really are after and there comes a point when you have to confront it for what it really is, not what it appears to be because the agenda cover-ups are far more worse than what one is accused of, but if they can't admit to what their real agenda was, then they have to live with what was told...the peach pit is under the third shell, Eileen, the Sage is Truth...

Sage

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
A wise poem and lesson above all I've read in a while. This scenario is real and who is the wise sage my dear Eileen? I love the lesson and the way you chose to tell it.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Oh wow! What a wonderful write! And it rhymed perfectly...You are still the master bar none!


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