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Ophiuchi Cloud Visit
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Young Stars in the Rho Ophiuchi Cloud
...NASA


Poem Artwork


 

Last in the series

...

surging up inside of me
with the force of a tsunami
the urge to soar the galaxies
where unknown life is living free


how can i still my restless spirit
i can't deny  forces within  that
won't stop its din,  has me in a spin


there must be a way to assuage the
crave that threatens to make me a
star gazing slave

i decide to let my spirit soar,and
out the open door i fly up to the
tumultuous sky,feeling so high


i pass through clouds that roil with
rage,like the finest actor on a stage
portraying the rath of a Creator,who
is causing havoc with the equator


the winds help blow me through  storms
action, and soon i have found my traction
as i soar an unknown galaxy, on a course
into infinity


now the drama will unfold in  colorama
that startles the eyes with surprise as
hues never seen before embrace places
with strange faces


my visit has me mesmerized ,by each
view that greets my eyes, makes me
wonder with hunger if  these realms
where i love to play will be my final
reality one day


et-2008
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Ophiuchi Cloud Visit"
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Beautiful writing Eileen
I always enjoyed reading your poetry
I read in a book that when
We die our spirit is free to travel anywhere in the world!
I want mine to stay in the mountains!
Inspiring journey my friend!
Peace Love and hugsss...Morning Star


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
an exceptionally inspiring sojourn through the universal playground ... enjoyed this stellar excursion ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
beautiful--both the image and the write

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
I decide to let my spirit soar

A wondrous decision, which has led you on many a wondrous journey.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
They said that after we die, our spirit is free to roam the universe and could travel to any place out there, you will have an eternity to visit each and everyone.
Hell most be to be relegate to the eternal shadows outside the universe and don't see the light no more.
Your poem got me going...sorry.

Georg

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Excellent writing sweet lady,have a wonderful day..Hugsssss

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
Gorgeous write, Eileen. There is no other way to describe it!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 25, 2008
gorgeous visit, and perhaps one day it will be a final reality

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
A mysticlal trip through the universe. Great images1....M

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
this is an awesome trip,,,,, Excellent!

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
Wonderful wonderment Eileen, and thank you for the awe-inspiring ride through the cosmos!!
A guided meditation even!!
Loved it ET!!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
In the words to one of the old "Highwaymen" songs, Johnny Cash proclaims. "I'll fly a starship cross the universe divine -- and when I reach the other side -- I'll find a place to rest my spirit if I can -- perhaps I may become a highwayman again -- or I may simply be a single drop of rain -- but I will remain -- And I'll be back again -- and again -- and again -- and again." Your poem is worthy of many readings. I will save and savor it often. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed on February 24, 2008
Dang, Eileen, you are so good! I am in awe of your talents as a writer! Very well penned and illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
...the saintly stars...await you...for they also dream...of your wishes.
John

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
"these realms where i love to play will be my final reality one day"
I pray for you emile

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
I believe that you have been a viable, living being in another galaxy . . . I believe that your inner soul strives to reach out and grasp your roots . . . I believe that these transparent poems you have graced AD with are like Morse Code searching the heavens for your past . . . I could be wrong, but you are certainly a celestial being within you heart . . . And you can take that to whatever bank you want to . . .

Reviewed on February 24, 2008
Stunning, Eileen, I love this series. You let your spirit, your creativity, soar - thanks for the ride. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2008
This is utterly grand; love it!


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