Traversing the Dreamscape (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Excellent! I love the softness of this piece, as well as the message...
Cryssa

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

ET, I am sometimes in man made hell at my job, everyone has their spirit and their dreams if only we didn't have to deal with people who don't understand where us dreamer enlightened type dwell.
Thought provoking and beautiful are your words that make this amazing poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Indeed, the soul dies, if i were not tired i'd expand...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Most outstanding thought provoking piece Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

This poetic view of strange unreal dream images
Is absolutely beautiful I especially think that
The last verse says it all for me!
Outstanding writing Eileen but
I always admired your talent!
Wishing you Peace Love and many hugsss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Wonderful write ET. And you are so right!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

And yet in dreamscapes, creativity explodes with blossoming visions anew. 'Tis the application that leaves us stumbling, bumbling. Awash in an endless sea void of pragmatism. Another excellent poem E T. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

WoW, very thought provoking and powerful. Great job Eileen, you gave me lots to think about today. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Eileen,

Powerful writing here, full of wisdom - thought provoking!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Been wondering where you've been - have missed you!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

We must take control and we are responsble for ourselves,, Eileen this is excellent,, and you sure have me pondering.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Good Morning Eileen,
Oh This Is A Great reality Poem!!
I Just Love Your Last Stanza:

"Life can't be devoid of spirit
without it we're an empty shell
the soul does not favor demerit
it cannot survive in man made hell" Those Words Are So Superb!!

Embraced~Embrasse'
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Powerful pen, especially the last two lines:

"the soul does not favor demerit/
it cannot survive in man made hell".

WOW!! EXCELLENT job, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

I have to say Eileen the last verse says it all. A great write and I thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Like a Fairy GoodMother traversing the dreamscape and, distracted by man's made hell, forgot to fill the empty shells.

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Life can't be devoid of spirit, without it we're an empty shell - how so very true, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2008

Got your ducks all lined up in that oft-phrased row, did we this morning, eh Eileen? A hodgepodge look at life and mistakes and mind over matter when it truly counts . . . You did good . . .

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

...and empty shell...if we listen inside...will give us wind of its spirit...so that we might find the magic within our dreams. Well penned and wise thoughts you have given us Eileen...
John

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

Oh life...so many backward steps to go forward... and on the way maybe write some fantastic poetry like this!!
All of it, Great!
Thank you ET xoxox :-D

Reviewed by sreelekha premjit

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

I loved the title truly imaginative.. traversing the dreamscape. The positive note with which you end your poem is truly uplifting. Thanks.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

Reflections that I have enjoyed and can relate to. I like the synthesis of your observation, it carries a lot of truth.

Axilea

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

One without spirit is an empty shell. How true this is! Great write, Eileen!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

'Life can't be devoid of spirit'. What an important line and summary of the poem. Good job, I'd say. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 13, 2008

i enjoyed this write-especially the final verse-without spirit we are indeed an empty shell