Humanity (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Excellent writing sweet lady,well done indeed..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Can you say WOW? Loved the depth you penned within these lines.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

As powerful as the thunder in a night sky. We are all humanity dear Eileen and I wish the whole world will heed to this stirring call. GBQ

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

so very on point, eileen. i agree with mr. ed; seems that it might be too late for humanity as we know it...
peace & blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Wow brillint words Eileen..deep write

A journey filled with knowledge of Humanity

Powerful message within!!

Peace Love and Light...And hugesss too...Morning star

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

A powerful write my friend...this goes well with the poem I posted The Ultimate Test...I think we were on the same page, they say that great minds think alike! Your offering has a wise message of hope, and encouragement! Well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Yes, somethings you have to pass through
Try as we will to go around them. . .
Or turn away from them.
But this sounds pretty deep
I say, lay it at the Creator's feet.
Doug

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Powerful writing, Eileen...a reminder of what we all must strive for...and in the end, always leaving us with hope.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

this is a bit sobering--i like it though

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Pray I say, that the wisdom you received will strenghten your endevour to save us all from hell, it's all on your shoulders now, like on all of ours, judging by our history in the dark corridors of hell, you think, that after Jesus tried, two thousand years ago, that you'll have a chance to do better? I say any more poems like this, and you are on your way! Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

A perilous journey with valued lessons learned of humility and the value of mankind through God's will, when at its best....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

remember each decides where to focus belief, thoughts, and experience...you can only focus on what is wrong with the world, or what is right with it.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

The late, great planet earth. Brought to you by greed and corruption. Great write ET. All too true.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Moving words, wow. You sure made me think on this one, an inspiration for all of us to look at ourselves and deal with what we are as 'a responsibility'. Great Write.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

"When we view every opportunity as a nail, we always react like a hammer". Humility is devoid of many of the pathways of life. We must walk until we find the right ones. A very moving, thought provoking poem from a great pen. JMW

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Powerful writing, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Eileen,

Oh, my goodness, don't do that - you scared me at the beginning - but shines with hope at the end - thank God!! Powerfully, convincingly penned - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Strong writing as ever, Eileen. You had me hooked with the bold assertions and graphic images, well-matched by the confidence and resonant clarity of the voice. A no-messing write which takes the reader by the scruff of the neck and... shakes! Yes, opt-out is not an option... even from this sea of apathy.... Hope you're well. Kate xx

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Yes! Such truth, Eileen...we are all a part of humanity and must share in the good and bad, and to work together to make our humanity one that God will be proud of. We cannot shirk our duties, no matter how small they be.
Well said, my dear humanity-friend!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Mans greed will be the end of us all..
I know you can overcome Eileen
With love,
Ron

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

An insightful way of reminding your readers never to give up.

Axilea

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

When in front of us are only problems we need to become their solution.

Georg

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Great little write, dark, highly intense and deeply contemplative.

Cheers and peacee,
Dan

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

We all have those moments of utter disgust only to wake up and find we have to be the solution or at least strive for it.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Powerful and intense, you describe exactly how I feel about humanity!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

A wonderful write you share with us filled with emotions. Thank you for sharing Eileen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

You touch me deeply with this poem, I can feel it so well. I know it so well, but we are light, and we must prevail, and accept that we need to help humanity not forsake it...
Wonderfully written and very intense.
Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Supposedly wanting to let go of humanity, but we cannot. Your write is extremely true and got to me inside where it counts. Keep humanity inside you and also let it out for all to see.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

WOW, that is all I can say. WOW Great write and very creative. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Quite powerful, Tiger Lily. Although we must all valiantly trek ever onward towards that tiny speck of light, there truly are many extremely dark days now when I ponder if it's already much too late for humanity.