Evelyn, you know I don't read everything you write, but I'm so glad I found this bit of your soul laid out bare and aching. Mesmerizing.
Ron
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2008
I think this is simply lovely writing, ET - where have I been? I've missed your talent! Your flow and rhyming schemes give this poem such ease - one is able to feel the emotion acutely because there is no tripping over awkward composition (something to which I aspire)!
Sometimes our heart sends a Mayday! Mayday! and nobody hears our cll of distress. All of it is encompassed in each word of the poem.
Georg
PS. By the way, I was Chief Engineer of an ULCC oil tanker of 368.000 tons with full load in the south Atlantic sea after rounding Cape Town when from our rear came that storm, I took similar pictures, our deck were more under water than up!
just a poem? please ... there is a lot of depth and truth in this poem exploring the heaviness of being, while not departing from its sense of continuously moving upward ...
Eileen, I pray that you are okay as this piece expresses such inner thoughts and core beliefs from a troubled soul in search of solace. God bless you always...
Oh the pain love causes, beautiful, painful write. You always do a beautiful job in expresses the deepest feelings and getting the reader to feel them also. Love, Bonnie
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Ron
George
Georg
PS. By the way, I was Chief Engineer of an ULCC oil tanker of 368.000 tons with full load in the south Atlantic sea after rounding Cape Town when from our rear came that storm, I took similar pictures, our deck were more under water than up!
There's so much emotion behind every word. Beautifully penned. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Be always safe,
Karen
Axilea
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
best, Michael
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.