Wandering Eyes (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

a heart once etched with love's scribe, never surrenders the visions left dwelling in sweet memories haunts -- this is another marvelous romance rendering from a heart that truly understands, love -- peace and love to you dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on November 17, 2008

Much truth in this contemplative piece...
Cryssa

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

well done

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

when our eyes wander through the past, memories of what we see forever last ...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Eileen,

Loved this immensely - brings back so many memories . . . thanks!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Enjoyed this write, Eileen. I'm sure many can relate to this one. I know I do.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Long term memory... our mind's greatest gift to us.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

OH thank God for memories such as this. Sometimes they fill holes in our souls as well. Beautiful write Eileen, simply beautiful. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

such truth--once we have loved, we do not forget

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

An excellent and written poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

The mind is an amazing recording machine,
Technology can't compare to what I can see

How so very true, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Eileen, I was thinking the same thing as Karla, this is a bittersweet poem. It takes much longer for the emotions to fade away than for the relationship. That can end on a dime, but the feelings...they can last forever. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Wandering eyes always wander in another direction, time to put up a STOP sign and a DETOUR. Thank you for sharing Eileen an excellent write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Bittersweet ... painfully, poignantly penned, Eileen. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

This is lovely, Eileen. I especially like, "You will always be wrapped in the tendrils Of my every fibre."

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Wandering eyes that knock the doors of jealousy, wandering eyes that compare with others what they have, wandering eyes that should be the prisoners only of an naked ardent all consuming beauty.

Georg

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on November 16, 2008

Wonderful memory. GBQ

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on November 15, 2008

If they wander, they ain't worth keepin'..... All men will "look" but if they do it in front of you...kick him to the curb... You are very good at this writing and I enjoyed it very much... lindalaw

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on November 15, 2008

Eyes will always wander TILL they come into focus.
That takes a lifetime for us.
"When I lie in bed and conjure up your image" GREAT LINE
Enjoyed
Doug

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 15, 2008

One cannot forget that lover who at one time captured your heart.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 15, 2008

This is amazing, thank you for sharing, you painted a vivid picture in my minds eye
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 15, 2008

ET, I absolutely can relate to this poem. I have a lost love that I feel the same way about...Lovely words on this late evening..Much peace, love, and light to you dear one,

Amber "V"