Dark Trivia (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

A favorite of mine. I love the second stanza. Thanks for sharing. Will

Reviewed on March 16, 2009

pride, the demon resident in the minds of men -- that wills us to be other than we know we should -- parity is thus forbidden to enter when there is a leer, driven by ego -- you make emoting a fine art form with your incredible talents Eileen -- this is magnificent poetry my dear friend -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Shedding Light

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

This is a well written piece.

Harold M. Nash

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Sounds like everyday life for some people. Isn't it a shame we can't get past all this s--t you laid out so cleaverly in your poem.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Wonderful poem Eileen. Filled with much emotion and beautifull written.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

haunting...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

As sad as the tale is, Eileen, the writing of it
is beautifully controlled. I love the alliteration
in the last stanza. -gene.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Gripping words - like being taken by the arm and made to listen! Some excellent word choices and combinations that conceptualize the emotions you project with on-target precision.

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

very sad and heart touching...I hope you are okay my friend for this one is one that tore at the heartstrings...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Pride is like salt in a wound or in the roots of a flower.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Sad one today, Eileen; hope you are okay! You are ever in my prayers! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

You been in my head or something? This is exactly how I feel as of late - confused. Keep hearing one thing, but they swear they're saying another - well done, Eileen. Particularly like the first stanza.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

Excellent writing as always sweet lady...stay safe and well..keep smiling...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

The grip of miscommunication, layers of misunderstood, and pride over parity - I think you've summed up our sad modern world, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

well said

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

great descriptive of the experiencing the less enjoyable emotions

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

being misunderstood is certainly a drag ... excellent poem ...

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

beautiful and deeply sad, it brings me to pause, as i feel as though I have experienced these very words. Thank you Eileen. Your words always touch my heart. Warmth and Love to you, Carin'

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

Kinda lost on this one...though its probably me, as I have been pretty much this way all day Saturday...Ed

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

Sad poem but I see hope within te verses. GBQ