E ver since I was five years old I sensed the presence of God L ike children who make believe E ven sharing meals with them E verything becomes imaginary N ever did I have such friends
T he one I whispered to and shared E verything with was my Creator R ealizing life through His eyes E ven though as I grew older I S hared less time with Him until I A llowed temptation to win, and sin
W ith a boy who aroused my passions A nd soon God was in another dimension L eft for the hot breath of love, until D estiny took me to hell and back again R unning wild in a world of fleeting pleasures O nly to realize after all the pain, the gain N eeds God's presence to have any meaning
ET, you shine with love for your creator, also lovely realization and full circle to be connected once more. Nicely done.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Eileen, you laced together a delicate and intricate poem of inspiration, faith and peace -- this is a masterful work my friend --peace and love -- Jon Michael
you met the challenge superbly, Eileen ... spiritually uplifting in content and a fine reflection of self ... i wonder, are roused passions really a sin?
Hi ET, As I expected you far exceeded your own claim...I read a book called Something More and the author says that a strong woman is a woman with a history and you can't have a history when you're young. You are a strong, blessed woman and every write proves this... stay strong my friend...
I feel your insight, many of us went that route, some will admit to it, you painted it with the help of his hand, and great poetry happened. Hugs! Jasmin Horst
I am so amazed at your gift to write so well and excellently put your thoughts across, like this gem of a poem, and then I realize you had the best Teacher in life, God. That explains how you can write this beauty.
This is exquisite. The Creator shines forth through your Gift of poetry. It is a blessing and an honor to know Him, and Him through your lines. Well done.
Those last two lines are a powerful testimony! This poem reminds me of the prodigal son. You know whom the father loved the best. Great response, Eileen!
Sis, I knew that you would raise to the challenge in the most sweet way and with that tender feeling towards our Father.
Your acronym gives justice to all your thoughts.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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Cryssa
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Soft and gentle refinement.
Enjoyed the self conviction weaved throughout.
Blessings take care,
Gwendolyn
EDWIN
Your faith and spiritual conviction come through wonderfully; fine response to the challenge.
John
In our lives life has no mining
We need his strength and love and blessings
Beautiful words of wisdom
I love your Picture its awesome!!
Awesome write!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light....Yolie
love,
Christine
E verything with was my Creator
How marvelous, Tiger Lily.
Be always safe,
Karen
In Spirit,
Bear
Regis
Cynthia
This is exquisite. The Creator shines forth through your Gift of poetry. It is a blessing and an honor to know Him, and Him through your lines. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Lin
Sheila
Your acronym gives justice to all your thoughts.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.