He's My Storm (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 9, 2009

my jealousy should be obvious with this envious reply of, what a lucky man -- "this enigma of many faces this transforming mystery of guile and grace" -- Eileen you've outdone yourself my dear friend -- surely, this is my new favorite E T poem -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 20, 2009

THE IMAGERY...SO VIVID...BRINGS FORTH A PICTURE OF ONE 'SURRENDERED' TO THE POWER OF LOVE...IN A BEAUTIFUL WAY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on August 18, 2009

Wonderful alliteration, effective imagery. but the best is that the poem shouts romance with out a conventional (cliched) form.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 18, 2009

Goodness ...
no wonder you're so popular here.
That second couplet is delightful
Gosh the gist of the whole thing is like a blanket of mist
A goodun chum
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

And the first hurricane just showed up on the radar.
Happen-chance. . . . .I think not
Your usual exquisite poetry.

Doug

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

Lucky man !
Whoever he is

Jerry

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

Absolutely a beautiful write Eileen
Love & peace Be with you

William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

A beautiful sustained metaphor here, Eileen, that characterises this man you love so very well. Electrifying images that conjure the conflict between energies of light and dark and I particularly like this couplet:

Like a clap of thunder that... parts the nimbus
clouds to deposit its plunder on a soft cirrus cloud

Richly observed; keenly felt. Wonderful work to read aloud! :)) xx

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 17, 2009

Another wonderful write that you share with us Eileen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

those many faces are captivating

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

Men are like that, but certain storms can be beautiful. Great write.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

"transforming mystery of guile and grace..."
how very beautifully expressed, eileen!
very much enjoyed the imagery herein; simply wonderful.
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

You light up the sky so perfectly with this poem, Eileen. Makes the term "Storm brewing" take on a whole new meaning, now!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

This is absolutely wonderful Eileen.

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

This is a torrid afair, were it not for those odd showers here and there, I think I'll take one now. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

...such an orchestrating poem with climax..well done Eileen!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

"...like a lascivious lion licking lava from lightning's lips..."???! ! ! I see that you are holding lil'brother Jersey's stash! ! ! man, you are so up there we can't see you from down here! LOL

EDvard, Ole Brother

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

Eileen,
A riot of imagination and experience and wonderful choices of image and word.

John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

Everything here, Eileen...your use of alliteration, your verse...incredibly beautiful.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

So magically you leave me in awe at the wonder...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Loves passion increases with the intensity of a storm.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Wonderful expressions and descriptions. Wow I am figuring as I am writing this that I have to really get a handle on my spelling again! I could of said so much more about the beautiful write.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

some really nice alliteration and imagery to this wonderful poem of love and admiration ...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

I'm glad this man opened your "doors." And I really like the poem, a lot! Patrick

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Grace, is from HE who can still the storm...It is He who thou dost love...well Done.

Allen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Eileen, Eileen, Eileen!

You KNOW I got to love this one - the pic; the many moods of Storm; your imagery in verse - undone by the power of your pen! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Enjoyed this, LadyJ

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Eileen, I don't know how your do it- or maybe I do-. You have a wonderful gift andn use it so well. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Once again I am in on the virginal wordplay of an E T Waldron poem. Once again I am in wonder of your sublime and mesmerizing verses and wordplay. You live within the stars and the Heavens and you words bring that fact out tenfold.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 15, 2009

Wow, you have set a tempest-wave of emotion here, Eileen, and that piccy is absolutely fantastic! This is most deffo a "StormSpinner" kind of write! Yes. Very well penned/imaged; brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D