I watched him as he blew his horn
piercing my heart just like a thorn
how well I recall those lips on me
in dreams of how it used to be
can it really be twenty years ago
when we were wrapped in loves glow
now I wonder how we let it drift away
neither of us made an effort to stay
even though our love was so strong
we both said it would last our life long
this feeling I have is it shared by him
or was I just a young man's whim
now his eyes have caught mine I see
recognition, my heart leaps knowing it
will soon be intermission.......I wait........
Recognition...Intermission...Anticipation...Reconciliation...ahhhh - what dreams are made of. You brought it all together in this poem, Eileen. Go for it, girl!!
Blessings and Love
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
Heartfelt, bittersweet reflection infused with a dash of hope.
The show must go on Eileen, you have your public waiting, refresh yourself, check your makeup, the character you are playing, or not,
see if you're in the groove, or out of it..........
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Intermission, interval, pause...not to be applied to love, or care, or longing, or expectation, it should be only apply when pain is on the table. Sadness between the lines, that intermission is shriveling to nothingness by now.
DONE WELL WITH THE IMAGERY THAT DRAWS A VIVID PICTURE OF THE ANTICIPATION AND JOY OF 'RENEWING'...A OLD LOVE AFFAIR. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
Blessings and Love
Sheila
Cryssa
Love, Ankin
see if you're in the groove, or out of it..........
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Carole~
EDWIN
Georg
The feelings are so real and honest and the longing palpable...and yet the interpretation is delightfully open. Gorgeous writing.
John
Be always safe,
Karen
With Love,
Cindy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.