Day Mates Night (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 13, 2011

I think this one is one of your best Eileen the pace was fast and rhyme top class.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 17, 2011

EVERYTHING HAS ITS SEASON...IN LIFE WE APPRECIATE BOTH, SUNRISE AND SUN SET. BECAUSE WE LEARN...LIGHT SHINES EVER SO BRIGHTLY IN THE NIGHT! A FINE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

EXCELLENT, Eileen: perfect in concept, rhythm and metre and adroitly expressed. Twilight is, for certain sure, the most tactile of between-times in which all things are possible and lines are most definitely merged. So lovely to see you posting again - have been thinking of you! :)) xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

ET, thought provoking with a mystical feel to this. wonderflly done as always!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

Absolutely Lovely, Eileen.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 16, 2011

Love this one, E.T.! And so nice to see you posting, Sis.

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

E T,

Very beautifully written poem and I love the last stanza.

Mary

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

The night I like better than the day,
And of course I thoroughly love what you write & the way...JD

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Wonderful poem, Eileen; always glad to see you here! Well done yet again! Love you!

(((HUGS))) and prayers~

As always, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

There is much beauty and resolute truth in your words...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

"Lest I be caught in twilight
forever and a day..."
is the nub of the matter, Eileen..
how that resonates, hits home!
The entire work strikes and charms at once.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Disarmingly charming!
You have written with such imaginative insight here!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

surely the terminator is the offspring of this solar mating mystery of light and no light -- stygian losses are assured in the eternal battle -- Eileen you have teased me with this poem -- creative, interesting and an ending I adore -- "just when we think night has its way, alas, the light has its day", perfect! -- from the twilight I wish you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

It sounds like an urban warfare is already alive and well in Camden. But then, I've been around a few cities during my life and bad areas come and go like seasons in the wind. My dad used to talk about Cicero. When I was in San Francisco it was Little Five Points. There was Watts. There is always some place where you can get shot.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Full circle feel...great work...nice to see you post!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

The nightfall and the twilight of dawn are indeed mysterious "places" to be in, Eileen. Thank you also for teaching me a new word, "adumbrate." Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

i wonder what're more mysterious, the day mating night or the night mating day? either way, they are both an inspired experience ... wonderful poem, ET ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

always felt dusk and dawn were magical....the space they mate :) loved this one!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2011

Haha! Whimsical and mysterious all at once, my friend.

"yet still in corners adumbrate
a shadow of the night"

Loved this very necessary two lines to this poem. Had to look up adumbrate. Like that word.