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Just Take Notice
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Next time you are out to a store or park etc. Take a moment to speak to the person next to you. How much can you tell about that person in five minutes. Did they have a smile or a stern look, did they have any hair, what colour was it. Did they wear a ring upon their finger, how were they dressed, did they have an accent. Were their hands callused or soft and gentle. Did they speak in a soft voice or a husky voice. Did they look tired or refreshed. Just take notice, for everyone has a life story to be told. We can tell so much in a very short time.


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Just Take Notice

As I walked the busy hours one day,
I noticed the people one the street.
Some of them looked very stern,
Others would smile when we’d meet.

I’d notice how they’d chose to dress,
And thought of where they work,
You can tell so much about them,
With their clothes and the way they look.

I’d gaze upon their fingers,
Maybe see a diamond or wedding ring.
I’d strain to listen as they pass,
Some in silence and others would sing.

I knew those who stayed up late last night,
And the ones who got just enough rest,
For those were the ones who smiled and sang,
The ones I seemed to like the best.

I noticed others resting there,
Where I knew they spent the night,
And prayed today would be much brighter,
And things for them would turn out right.

I take notice of those around me,
For they are all part of a large family,
We must learn to love and accept them,
As we chose to be accepted lovingly.



 

 
 


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 Reviews of "Just Take Notice"
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
WE must always take notice, but from experience Rose :)
A ring could of been left near the kitchen sink, after brushing their teeth!
I love the aspect of WE NEED to notice, and we do!
and we should!
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
EVERYONE!
WArmest Blessings of Inner PEACE,Love, WArm Light and Wisdom! Write ON!
Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox

Reviewed on August 9, 2007
Beautiful write dear sis, you and I think so much alike and isn't it a wonderful feeling to make poeple smile or to give them a compliment that brightens up their eyes.

Love you sis
Selena

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Nice poem and a good thought. Lady J

Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Oh yes you have the writer's heart and intuition!

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Rose, I love to strike up a conversation with people, my family has often said, "You never meet a stranger do you?" Isn't it great to give a smile and a hello to those you see and especially those who are homeless, handicapped, or not as fortunate as we are. I do believe we work as angels to others when we are kind and caring. I loved this Rose it shows the beauty you have living inside.

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Mom used to love watching others shoppers while I collected our groceries. She said they were fascinating just to see what they were doing, whether they smiled or frowned. Good write.

George

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Rose, you are so perceptive about 'eye-level' Go read "The Story of an Hour" written by Kate Chopin. This is one of the best short stories you will ever read. Keep writing lady.

BTW, I've got such a big mouth it's never been a problem initiating conversation, even if it's to myself. LOL.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
I agree with Andy. Even here in Malta it is considered improper to watch a person too much. However there is one difference. Here we almost know each other very well and so do speak casually. Of course there will always be some whom you evade for private reasons. But never with hard feelings, at least as far as I'm concerned. You uphold a great ideal though. Victor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Not always easy in England, but in America, I could talk for England..
Peeps are far more outgoing in the main over there...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
i do the same and am amazed sometimes at the wonderful and interesting stories folks reveal when someone takes time to listen-good write

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
I've tried to do as you suggest many times, Rose. And it's always struck me that folks in big cities are far less receptive to strangers talking to them then those in small towns. Probably why I like the country much better these days.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Beautiful Rose! Yore sweet, lovin nature shines throughtout this beautiful write! I loved it and I love you too! SC

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Beautiful writing Rose,Just like you sweet lady...Hugss

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Obviously you have a caring heart to be taking note of thse who pass you by. A loving heart makes the world a better place to live in. Love Holly

Reviewed by Cedric III
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
and i find that taking the smallest notice in someone else can have such a profound effect.
lucky for me i can initiate conversation with just about anyone and so i have some crazy interactions while waiting in line at the supermarket or wherever.


it makes me sad the way ppl always look down when they walk... did you know most ppl dont look above eye level... theres so much world above eye level...

yes... good piece... everyone needs a reminder every now and then =)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Visual Awarenessisi one of the gifts we have, but I don't think too many of us take time to use it as you mentioned. Good reminder write!.. I often look at faces , or notice actions.. I can tell a little something about a person from that>........M

Reviewed on August 8, 2007
Beautiful write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 8, 2007
As always dear cuz your heart flows from each word of this one as you look around you with open mind and the desire to make the world a happier place. Yes there is much we can learn if we look instead of look past those around us.
hugs
Fee


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