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This Is Good-bye Honey
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I'm in that Country mood again and I am I can blame it on Cousin Fee this time, Love ya face Cuz.
It can be a frightening experience to think of starting a life all alone after years as being a devoted wife. I often wondered where would I go and what would I do if I were in such a situation. How would I explain that I failed as a wife. Why would I think it was all my fault? Why would I presume that I had caused him to stray into the arms of another? This is where usually place the blame until our brain kicks in and we realize we saw it coming foe a long time but just brushed it aside, refused to accept it and wanting to stall time so we wouldn’t have to face life alone.

This Is Good-bye Honey
(Country Song)
August 16, 2007
Written by Rose Marie Rideout

I packed an overnight bag,
  Took my old guitar in hand,
I’ll start a brand-new life,
Find myself a lovin man.
I know he’s out there somewhere,
With a gentle, caring heart,
So, this is good-bye Honey,
I deserve a brand new start.

Chorus:
I’m tired of all your cheatin,
Lonely nights in a cold bed,
I’m tired of feeling worthless,
And wishin I were dead.
I’m tired of all your comments,
for I’ve loved no one but you,
So this is good-bye Honey,
I’m telling you we’re through.

Now you’ve got your freedom,
Don't want excuses anymore,
You don’t have to sneak around,
You’re free to walk right out that door,
 No more nights of wonderin,
What I’ll say when you get home,
For this is good-bye Honey,
Now you’re left here all alone.

Repeat Chorus

I just want someone to hold me,
Close to him every night,
Lovin me forever gently,
Until the morning light.
I've done nothin to deserve,
What you have put me through,
I can go on livin my life,
Forever dear without you.

 

Repeat Chorus

 

Because I'm tired of all your cheatin,
Lonely nights in a cold bed,
I'm tired of feelin worthless,
And wishin I were dead.
I'll live a happy life now,
Not the one I had with you,
So this is good-bye Honey,
I'm tellin you we're through.
So this is good-bye Honey,
I'm so happy that we're through


 
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "This Is Good-bye Honey"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 23, 2007
Yep, I can see how your husband wouldn't like this, but it's a good thing it's an "only - what if". You're right it is an excellent C/W song.

Kathy

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 17, 2007
Good fur You, Beautiful Rose! You deserve a Hero, not a Damn Zero! Men are like buses, one will roll by bout every fifteen minutes! Ifen Ya sees one that strikes yore fancy hop on board, or let it roll on out without Ya! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed on August 17, 2007
What a beautiful, sentimental country crooner/song!
I would love to hear!
You spoke of a hurting heart Rose, with such clarity!
Thank YOU!
GOOD LUCK Fee Sweetie - and your loving once mate ~ Miracles do happen, and the future is for the tellin'
Warmed in Inner Peace,LOVE, Light and Wisdom! Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox

STay POsitive!
Stay SAFE!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Mastery of the English language! Sometimes things are not meant to be. Something better awaits around the next turn.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Well done, and well said. In real life we do blame ourselves sometimes for things but I only blamed myself for not knowing how to stop him. Plenty more where he came from...Lady J

ps. I know you are glad you have such a wonderful hubby and life and it's still good to know you can empathize with some of us less fortuneate ladies

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Fantastic, get it published!You have great talent Rose!

ET

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Nashville here I come!! Good pen to make an excellent song.

George

Reviewed on August 16, 2007
I smell hit song all over this! Very well done! BRAVA! :)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
I suppose you need tell him one thing: Just don't come back or you'll get kicked where you deserve. Of course it is not your fault. Cheatuing men deserve what they get. Lovely country song, I could almost hear the music. Victor

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Rose, "I'm tired of your cheatin, lonely nights in a cold bed," & tired of you playing games in my head. Oh, I could just hear this as it is sung by an artist. This grabs the ole heart and twists it around. What more can I say...I loved it!!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
A country song indeed...a true tear jerker...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
I love this country song, Rose, You go girl!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Great song sis, now you can really put that guitar to work.

Love & hugs
Selena

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Great country tearjerker Rose, I expect I will hear you singing this in a few months or so... hugs

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 16, 2007
Hey some country singer should gobble these lyrics up


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