Every now and then we have an off day as others do and we can often look into anothers eyes and see what they are feeling. Those are the times we just wish we could change whatever the problem is so we don't feel like we are being cast aside, even though they don't mean to make us feel that way, just sometimes.
Just Sometimes
Just sometimes I want to put my arms around you, Knowing that you too want to have me near, But then I can’t help but get this strange and cooling feeling, That just for a day, You really don’t care.
Just sometimes I shed a tear, And then I catch myself, For I really can’t seem to understand why, When I think off my life, Why I would want to cry.
Just sometimes I feel that something real is missing, Not knowing just what that may be, Then I wipe away my tear, Of the many times I cry, So you could never see.
Just sometimes I wonder when I look into your eyes, What is on your mind, Sometimes I see hurt and pain, Wishing I could take it away To see you happy once again.
Powerful! Moving! Sincere! Loving!
These words only begin to capture the emotions that it evoked.
From the bottom [and top] of my heart, Thank you.
Kathy
This dear sis is a beautiful heartfelt write. It would truly be a wonderful thing if we could only know what our other half is thinking and if they could read our feelings as well but life isn't like that, I wish often that I was a mind reader, no such luck.
very thoughtful write-so much emotion is involved when one goes through a tough time
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
As always a beautifil poem Rose, Blessings, Holly
Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
You have captured this emotion beautifully. We all know it, and, it is no stranger in our every day life. The wonderful thing is, that every once in a while, we can make that person happy again. thank you for a wonderful poem.
regards,
Chris
Reviewed by Sophia Arbeau (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Very emotion filled read. Beautiful words from a beautiful soul. Love ya Mom.
Sophia xo
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Beautiful writing sweet lady,you have such a pure and loving heart Rose,have a wonderful day ok...Hugsssssssss
The human capacity to love and care is stronger in some people than others and I believe what you write here describes that big old heart of yours and your feelings to a tee...but you cannot always look into the soul of another and understand what they are feeling for humans are such complicated creatures that we often do not know ourselves. All you can do is smile and if they ask for a hand, a word or a shoulder be there to offer it. A lot of love in this write Rose...thank you for sharing.
hugs
Cuz Fee
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Excellent, very well expressed this feeling...Hugs and Love, Peggy
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
But thank God not always. We can't help feeling like this. Happily it is only sometimes. Fine poem. Victor
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These words only begin to capture the emotions that it evoked.
From the bottom [and top] of my heart, Thank you.
Kathy
Love you sis
Selena
Walt
Blessings,
Joyce B.
regards,
Chris
Sophia xo
Love,
Chanti Lace
hugs
Cuz Fee