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He's A Smooth Talker
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Oh yes we have seen it before, He has come along looking like a million dollars and ah huh you got it, swept us right off our feet. We best look with our brains and not our emotions, if we really don’t want to be hurt bad girls.


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He’s A Smooth Talker
February 1, 2008
By Rose Marie Rideout

Let me share with you a story,
That I have kept deep in my heart,
 I don’t really know what to say,
From the beginning I will  start.


Many, many years ago,
In a place not far from here,
I fell in love with a gentleman
Who said he’d always care.

This tall dark and handsome fellow,
Smooth talker, dressed in quiet a style,
He undressed me with his eyes,
 Thought he’d be around for a while.


He stole my heart and left me,
For another I have found,
Used me to fulfill all his desires,
Then tossed me to the ground.

I couldn’t see it coming,
Closed my eyes and walked away,
Continued to accept all excuses,
His lies throughout each day.

It only hurt me for a little while,
I grew stronger everyday,
I’ve learned to ignore the gentlemen,
With disrobing eyes who look my way.

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "He's A Smooth Talker"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Me too. Sometimes when I worked in hospitals, all those nurses, I swear sometimes I think they just passed me around. I felt so cheap and used.......

Walt

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
A great tail and I think a lot of us can relate. Lady J

Reviewed on January 28, 2008
Wonderful write sis, and I am sure we have encountered at least one of those in our lives, right girls.

Love you sis,
Selena

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
There are a lot of Smooth talkers out there......... M

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
this one's for the 'zines - it would sell -very funny pic!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
So well put. Bravo. Liz

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
well said

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
This is one thing that I had instilled in me and instill in mine -- take your time with any relationship, not to be always second guessing people, but sometimes you have to. Thanks for sharing.

Sanja xo

Reviewed on January 25, 2008
I really like this poem. Many have had this experience in their lives--swept away by a nice looking sweet talker. But we learn from this.... and warn others to be careful. :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 25, 2008
Hey! I promised you a rose's garden, nobody said it was to have roses.
Smooth talkers are like a bee, once they got the elixir wam! they are gone.

Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Look at a lass in that way, and they'll smack you in the gob...
The 5 F's sill carry on today....

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
yes, i agree, a very important message here-well put

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Excellent message in this wonderful poem Rose! methinks all women have met men like this,and men too on the distaff side have met similar women. The hope is to find out before we give them our hearts.

ciao
et

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Flows wonderful my friend, well written with a wise message within...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Often we only see what we want to see at the time and then when we do open our eyes and no that we were wrong the hurt is like a scalding burn that needs to heal. I have known women who played games with men's hearts as well but...I have to ask myself, did I not welcome it in my own way. Great Write dear Cuz and yea some are smooth talkers on both sides of the gender pool...
fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Very nicely said Rose. Great rhyme and meter that flows freely and gets the reader right into the story. Images come to mind easily. Well done my friend.

Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Heartbreaking write, Rose; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on January 24, 2008
Rose,

Timely warning in heartbreaking lines born from experience...powerfully penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

What makes it scarier is the Internet: most people seem not to be whom they say they are. :(


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