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Lost In A World Without You
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Sorry but I am in that country mood again. I thought I'd try my hand at another song, it must be the thoughts of our up coming trip to Nashville in April. Here goes.


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Lost In A World Without You

Never thought the day would come,
When I’d be all alone and blue.
Just thought there’d always be,
A me dear here with you.
Things seem to change overnight,
Today I opened up my eyes,
I found you packed and you were gone,
and now to my surprise.

(CHORUS) 
I’m sitting in my world all alone,
You’re not here with me at home.
I don’t know what it is that I should do,
For I’m lost here in a world without you.

Not even note no number dear,
 Nothing did you leave behind,
Things seem to change through the night,
Tell me dear, could you be so unkind?
I look out through the window,
I watched you slowly drive away,
Did you not stop and think,
That I would cry for you everyday.

(CHORUS)

I never thought this day would come,
When I’d be all alone and blue,
Just thought there’d always be
A me dear here with you.
The days will slowly pass me by,
When time alone will heal the pain,
I’ll wait patiently for your return,
I know you’ll want this love again.

CHORUS)



 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Lost In A World Without You"
Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
Very sad song, very painful and hopeful in a wishful but unlikely way. Thanks for sharing.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
What a meaningful song - I enjoyed the flow. Thank you for sharing.

Sanja xo

Reviewed on January 27, 2008
This is certainly a sad but meaningful write sis, and yes indeed it would make a beautiful song. Sent it to Carrie Underwood.
By the way did you finish reading my book yet. LOL

I love you
sis

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
WOnderful song...you are very talented....keep it up...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Now who will sing it? Garth or a friend? Good job.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
What a great song poem ,,(as I call them) Wish i could hear the melody! Hope you'll have some good luck in publishing it!....M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Kenny and Wiily are the ones olding for me the fort after Johnny $$$ died, (first edition tape still running great)
This song/poem goes on the same road of Tammy's "stay by your man" that languid lament that are the soul of the Nashville crop.
Great.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
souonds like a good country song to me!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
..great tune...in love lost lyrics Rose...
John

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Wonderful tune, shows your talent! Loved it. :)

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Rose, this sounds like one of those great Country tunes...loved it!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Destined for stardom if you keep this up Rose!;-) Take the lyrics along with your guitar to Nashville! Wishing you a great trip blessed with happy days!

Luv
et

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Kewl, da naa da naa, is about my limit on a guitar, so this was easy to hear too... Only time I was down that way was in 87, i think it was by that big river with the old boats that had big paddle wheels...

Mississippi, thats the one..... Have fun fun fun, i didn't cos I just can't get on with such erm, music?

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Lookout Nashville! Seems like you are BOTH going to have a wonderful time. Quality inspiration here, Rose, and even I (who is no great authority on the genre) can tell that this song would most definitely be a hit. It's strong and has a certain hypnotic sway. Straight from the soul and I'll bet it will be played with a wholeheated gutsiness. Can feel it from here. TY and have the most glorious trip. Kate xx

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Rose,

Have a great trip. Perhaps you can sell them that song when you get there. You sold me. Excellently penned. Peace, Love, Blessings and a Safe Journey, Paul.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
And a great song it is my friend, be sure to take it on your trip to Tennessee! Sing on my friend, enjoy your trip!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
An outstanding song Rose
Beautifully composed
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Rose, this is awesome,, you sing on girl. and have fun in Nashville!!!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Such a lovely song dear Cuz and I am sure you will be putting the chords to it and I will hear this in your repretoire this spring.
hUgs
cuz
Fee

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
You're going to Nashville--and you are not even taking ME??? HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!! LOL Have fun; and may your country dreams come true! Another surefire hit!! Good on ya, Rose! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I love country music, so I don't mind your country moods AT all! LOL

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
I can hear you singin this all the way to Nashville, Rose. Sing On, and Have Tons of Fun on your trip.


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