Sorry but I am in that country mood again. I thought I'd try my hand at another song, it must be the thoughts of our up coming trip to Nashville in April. Here goes.
Lost In A World Without You
Never thought the day would come, When I’d be all alone and blue. Just thought there’d always be, A me dear here with you. Things seem to change overnight, Today I opened up my eyes, I found you packed and you were gone, and now to my surprise.
(CHORUS) I’m sitting in my world all alone, You’re not here with me at home. I don’t know what it is that I should do, For I’m lost here in a world without you.
Not even note no number dear, Nothing did you leave behind, Things seem to change through the night, Tell me dear, could you be so unkind? I look out through the window, I watched you slowly drive away, Did you not stop and think, That I would cry for you everyday.
(CHORUS)
I never thought this day would come, When I’d be all alone and blue, Just thought there’d always be A me dear here with you. The days will slowly pass me by, When time alone will heal the pain, I’ll wait patiently for your return, I know you’ll want this love again.
This is certainly a sad but meaningful write sis, and yes indeed it would make a beautiful song. Sent it to Carrie Underwood.
By the way did you finish reading my book yet. LOL
Kenny and Wiily are the ones olding for me the fort after Johnny $$$ died, (first edition tape still running great)
This song/poem goes on the same road of Tammy's "stay by your man" that languid lament that are the soul of the Nashville crop.
Great.
Georg
Destined for stardom if you keep this up Rose!;-) Take the lyrics along with your guitar to Nashville! Wishing you a great trip blessed with happy days!
Luv
et
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Kewl, da naa da naa, is about my limit on a guitar, so this was easy to hear too... Only time I was down that way was in 87, i think it was by that big river with the old boats that had big paddle wheels...
Mississippi, thats the one..... Have fun fun fun, i didn't cos I just can't get on with such erm, music?
Lookout Nashville! Seems like you are BOTH going to have a wonderful time. Quality inspiration here, Rose, and even I (who is no great authority on the genre) can tell that this song would most definitely be a hit. It's strong and has a certain hypnotic sway. Straight from the soul and I'll bet it will be played with a wholeheated gutsiness. Can feel it from here. TY and have the most glorious trip. Kate xx
Have a great trip. Perhaps you can sell them that song when you get there. You sold me. Excellently penned. Peace, Love, Blessings and a Safe Journey, Paul.
You're going to Nashville--and you are not even taking ME??? HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!! LOL Have fun; and may your country dreams come true! Another surefire hit!! Good on ya, Rose! Very well penned; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I love country music, so I don't mind your country moods AT all! LOL
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Ed
Sanja xo
By the way did you finish reading my book yet. LOL
I love you
sis
This song/poem goes on the same road of Tammy's "stay by your man" that languid lament that are the soul of the Nashville crop.
Great.
Georg
John
Luv
et
Mississippi, thats the one..... Have fun fun fun, i didn't cos I just can't get on with such erm, music?
Have a great trip. Perhaps you can sell them that song when you get there. You sold me. Excellently penned. Peace, Love, Blessings and a Safe Journey, Paul.
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Beautifully composed
Peace & love be with you
William
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
hUgs
cuz
Fee
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I love country music, so I don't mind your country moods AT all! LOL