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You Are On The Losing End
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Just a thought for words to share, not my life but I am sure there are other's who have gone through this, just to find their partner lives a life of misery for their choices.

You Are On The Losing End

Sitting in silence all alone,
On a misty cold damp night,
I felt my heart break into,
For things that weren’t just right.
I could hear the words you spoke to me,
The words that broke my heart,
 The look I saw deep within your eyes,
That said we now must part.

I recall the look within your eyes,
When you said you really had to go,
You were off and leaving,
For reasons I did not know.
You tried to break it gently,
You found another life ahead,
For you to have found another,
To share your life, your love and bed.

I to this day don’t understand,
What have I done so wrong,
When you just up and left me,
You should be here where you belong.
You say you’ve found another,
To share your life, your love and bed,
But you are on the losing end,
When all was done and said.


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 Reviews of "You Are On The Losing End"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
sad occurance but positive in the end

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
I wouldn't have believed you if you had not put that disclaimer that this was not your experience. You write romance so sincerely. But yes the broken lives and rebuilding. It's a bummer. But when things don't work out they don't work out. Great write. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Think you are so right, so many broken lives only to be rebuilt again and again, but that is the way it is sometimes...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
sad sentiment...steps upon the heart...are well written in your heartfelt write Rose...
very well done...
John

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Highly effective words that wake up old memories...well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Rose, truly a sad & heartfelt write...I think you did a wonderful job with this one.

Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Excellent write, Rose; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
So, there are more walking on the gray garden after all.

Georg

Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Beautifully penned, Rose, these heartfelt lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
This happens all too often,,,Thank goodness for Family,Friends,Faith.
Moving heartfelt words Rose.
Love, Christine

Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Such a sad and well penned write Rose.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Another excellant set of song lyrics Rose and maybe one that Nashville will pick up on. Regardlesss this is a sad but moving write that most of us can relate to at one stage in our lifes or another. Well done cuz.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Great write and happy it's not your life my dear and even if it was I'm happy that you know yourself enough to think the other person is on the losing end...

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Yes, been through it, felt it's sadness and lost hope throught it, but love came again. As of now I want no more love from someone, never to be rejected again.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Glad to hear it's not your life. Very well written Rose. May give some a few things to think about. God bless and have a wonderful day.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 6, 2008
Having gone through this myself, your words brought back many memories.


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