Sometimes going for a night time walk can be relaxing and other times scary, it's all according to where you decide to walk and at what hour.
Along The Darkened Path
I walked along the darkened path,
Not knowing what was beyond,
I knew there could be danger,
For a place I did not belong.
Why had I chosen to follow my thoughts,
Which led me far from home,
Now off in the middle of nowhere,
In the debt of the forest alone.
What were the sounds I was hearing,
What sights would there be ahead,
Why did I follow my instincts,
When I could be home in my cozy bed.
What was the sound I just heard,
Who’s shadow is following me,
Too afraid to turn around,
I shiver at what I might see.
A voice is whispering softly,
Not scary, nor frightening at all,
Just the sounds of birds rustling through trees,
For it’s now coming on fall.
Soon they’ll be flying high,
Off to the warmer lands they’ll roam,
The cold weather here would freeze them,
They need the warmth for their home. Now I’ll just turn myself around,
Go home to where I belong,
For these walks along darkened paths,
At this late hour is wrong.
Rose I Love Your Photograph You Have Choosen!!
Your Dark Walk Was Frightful.....leering...lurking...
Then Actually Very Beautiful :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
It's interesting to see how the place's atmosphere can awaken fears that are in one's mind and heart. So many questions that you share here, with those softly whispering voices that need to be confronted... just an impression I had. :)
I'm afraid my vivid imagination and a couple of terrifying experiences as a child/teenager makes me hypersenstive to walking anywhere too alone these days, Rose. But this has such atmosphere, coupled with a gripping train of thought, strongly expressed in both sense and sight. Also love the metaphorical thoughts that are perhaps contained here. Kate xx
Yes, please don't walk in the dark by yourself, there is evil(someone, some crazy lunatic)that might be waiting beyond, I've always heeded to my sisters wise saying "just because you have God in you, doesn't mean you should tempt the devil"
Beautifully writing and expressed thoughts
Its very dangers to walk the
areas your not familiar with at night
I love the visuals your words captured
Its awesome and dark!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugsss....Morning star
Rose... this work is very much one of those that should be considered exceptional. I believe you have alot more where this came from....keep searching... :-)) lindalaw
OOOOO Sugar! This un was a real insight into yore writer's mind, a writer is always a thinkin drama and sees and hears thangs that other folks ignore! GOOD UN! HUGS! SC
And just think, as you go along a disturbed coyote belt out one of those blood curling howls just behind you, your exit going back home will beat olympic track times.
Excellent write, Rose; brava! When I take a walk, I go with someone; have already been threatened a few times a few years back; ever since, I go with a buddy (my twin mostly).
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Had me looking over my shoulder cuz, maybe you'd better Fred to trail along behind you on the Harley...lol Good write though and defiantely breaking out of the box one for you.
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fee
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Love you sis,
Selena
Your Dark Walk Was Frightful.....leering...lurking...
Then Actually Very Beautiful :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Axilea
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis
John
Its very dangers to walk the
areas your not familiar with at night
I love the visuals your words captured
Its awesome and dark!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...and hugsss....Morning star
Cheers,
Dan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
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fee