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You Silently Slip Away
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Every morning we go through the same thing as I watch Fred silently slip out of bed with the warning as he sees me peeping at him not to think about getting up. He claims he is a big boy and is capable of getting some breakfast, he's rather see me get some rest. I suffer from sleep Apnea and cronic pain.


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You Silently Slip Away
February 9, 2010
Written by Rose Marie Rideout

 

 

I opened my eyes at half past five
You were slowly slipping away,
You didn’t want to wake me up,
As you left to start your work day.

I wanted to get you breakfast,
But you sternly said no,
You’d rather see me get rest,
And soon you’d have to go.

I heard the coffee pot running,
I could smell the toast you had made,
As I lay here just relaxing,
Under the covers tucked in my bed.

I listened to the shower,
Knowing you were all alone,
I wished and prayed for your arms,
Just tell me today you’ll stay home.

You work so hard it seems to me,
To give me all that I’d ever ask for,
Within a second there was silence,
As I heard the click of the door.

I know we have all that we’ll need,
Now are the things we want each day,
So tomorrow will be another repeat,
As you silently slip away.



 

 


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 Reviews of "You Silently Slip Away"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 13, 2010
Touching and endearing....M

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
so sweet, both of you. LadyJ

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
An excellent writing crafted by you, Rose.

GOD BLESS
Tony

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
Oh Rose!...maybe if Fred would read Fire on the Water he will be most than willing to stay en bed with you longer!!! (LOL)

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 10, 2010
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
this is truly beautiful in the love for one another expressed so beautifully

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Ohh... the yearning and hunger for his arms around you was tantilizing. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Rose,
You have my full sympathy and understanding regarding sleep apnea, it's an infliction, but it doesn't stop your great spirit from feeling or your heart from loving...you are a strength and an inspiration.

John

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Dear Rose, This is a nice poem and a beautiful description. We alternate in silently slipping away to fix breakfast. And life goes on. Love Emile

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
This is a great write, Rose. Very well done.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Sorry for the lack of sleep but you have an abundance of love. God bless you.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Very sweet, loving words revealing the thoughts of one exceptionally loving wife and one exceptionally loving husband.
Markie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
He sounds to be totally considerate and has compassion for you, and you are lucky to have him, & he you...Ed

Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Beautiful write sis, I know all about Sleep Apnea and the God for saken mask, it makes me feel like an alien. Yes, sometimes I think it would be nice to be wealthy and then our men could spend more time with us, but we know that is not reality for most of us.

Love you sis,
Selena

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
How beautiful, Rose....and I hope you're feeling better soon...but in the meantime, it's so nice to have someone watch over you.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on February 9, 2010
And that is what true love is all about! Fred puts you before himself...bless you both, Rose! Sorry about your sleeping disorder..believe me I understand! You're in my thoughts and prayers.

Anna

Reviewed on February 9, 2010
Great write, Rose, but sorry to hear you have sleep apnea and chronic pain. You are in my prayers; I pray God gives you extra breath to breathe easier and to ease your pain.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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