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Tell Me, What Have I Done
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I've been hanging out with Fee and we've been putting chords to songs and taping and singing up a storm and I've been just loving it. He seems to inspire my song writing when we get together.
Here goes.......


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Tell Me, What have I Done
By Rose marie Rideout
March 1, 2010

Girl….

My eyes seem to follow you,
Though you cannot see,
My heart is breaking so,
I just can’t set you free.
It’s not for another love,
You feel you have to go,
I just don’t understand,
Just tell me so I’ll know.

Chorus Girl…
What have I done to hurt you,
What makes you shed each tear?
Darling can’t you see,
Through the years how much I care?
Just give me all you’ve got to give,
 Then give me even more.
 Just give our love another chance,
Don’t walk out through the door.

Guy
There’s certain things about me,
 Girl you just don’t understand,
Emotions I’ve been going through,
Ain’t right for any man.
If I stay, I’ll hurt again,
I know it can’t be right,
For I'll just go on hurting you,
Each day, throughout each night

Chorus Girl…

 
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 Reviews of "Tell Me, What Have I Done"
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on March 6, 2010
an utterly beautiful though heart wrenching & reaching song Rose
from the bounty of love even through the pain
as I always say---> hurt me with the truth
rather than destroy me with a lie...and it does hurt sometimes
Love & Bounties
Vickie
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 3, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
Wow awesome lyrics
And song a little bite of country on this
Song and I just love it
I could almost hear the strings
On this fantastic song!!
Love the picture too!
Wishing you lots more musical inspiration
Love Peace and Light…Yolie
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
Hangin out with Fee brings some wonderful, melodious and heart-melting moments, Rose! I love the picture, as well. How big, tender and in-tune your hearts must be to be able to exude such soul and warmth through your joint music and writings. It would be so lovely to be able to hear a soundbite or a wav.file as an attachment. I'd love to hear your voices. Beautiful, thank you both. xxx
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
Moving words Rose...Keep being inspired, always sing~
Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
I love the lyrics sis, great job between the you and our cuz.

Love you sis,
Selena
Reviewed by Angela Ciero
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
I'd love to hear you singing it! Great Lyrics!
God Bless!
Angela
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
Wonderful lyrics, Singin' Rose; well done! Glad you are having fun with Cuzzin Fee; good on you both!

(((HUGS))) and much love to you (and Strummin' Fee)~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 2, 2010
Around the camps fireplace, heeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww!!!

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
What a wonderful team you are, Rose!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
wonderful-tell Fee hi for me!
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Well done, Rose, well done indeed.

John
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Wow, Rose, those are rather great lyrics, would love to hear them set to music.
Markie
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Oh Rose, this is fantastic and you and Fee sure do make such a great team. Sendin love to both...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Heart rending. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
All the markings of a great country song, Rose! Well done!

Anna
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Sounds good cuz look forward to giving it a go with you at our next cousnin's day...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Love that Pict. Of you Rose!
And WOW! This Song/Poem is magical!
So many can relate too!
Say Hi to Fee for Me! Ok

Blessings and Harmony, PurplePassionsSHEEoxxo
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 1, 2010
Nicely done, Rose.
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Can''t seem to shake that country bit of me,I tried but it didn''t work. The worst thing about country is someone loses a love, receives a broken hear
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