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A Thousand Pins.
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- A painful metamorphosis -

There once was a woman
who woke up in the morning
feeling weak and soft,
discovering in the mirror
the reflection of a rag doll.

By the time the sun
was up, in the middle of the sky
and bright burning rays
equalized all,
the poor thing shook from head to toe,
fearing for her pale skin,
made of thin, white cloth.

When she touched her head,
instead of silky hair,
she found the round tips
of pins, all over her.

She saw her mouth was sewn
and her head was heavy with hay.
It's strange that she could feel the pain,
deprived of her humanity.

Then she felt brutal hands
that lifted her stuffed body
up, to an unknown fate,
only to let her fall
into the knifelike night.

She could feel precisely
a thousand needles thrust
into what used to be her flesh;
her body was
that of a Voodoo doll
and the curse was on her.

Her jagged life has now ended,
yet her soul is trapped within her,
till the strong seams that stitch her sides
will fall apart, one day.

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 Reviews of "A Thousand Pins."
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
' By the time the sun was up in the middle of the sky'.....'Yet her soul is trapped within her, till the strong seams that stitch her sides will fall apart, one day' I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
I wonder how many feel like the doll...pinned within the curse of failure, sadness, disease, and any other form of atrocities that life can embedd within them...

how sad to go through this life and not be able to touch upon a small joy or happiness that is within the grasp...

nice work, Axilea...

enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed on October 13, 2007

I have enjoyed the reading of "A Thousand Pins" for its imagery, surreal and impressionism; for its artistic, ontological and poemization; for its esoteric message on teleological and abusive violation of human rights. "A Thousand Pins" is what one can call poetic excellence painted with the colors of the rainbow of wisdom.

Much gratitude to the author "A Thousand Pins" for sharing her JEWELS.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
How do you go about unpinning a Voodoo doll, 'cause I want to--desperately.--Charlie

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
Well done! Holly

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
This is so sad,,,, Indeed a beautiful write,,,very talanted.
Christine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
excellent metaphor and analogy ...

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on October 8, 2007
Greetings dear Axilea,
I related instantly to your poetry. Your words ooze and flow in melancholy, a sharp and vivid story of painful love and the bitter sting of lust. The acrid stench of loneliness..... You seek acceptance and you have found it here.....You seek approval and appreciation for what and who you are......You shall always find it here from me and those who love you unconditionally.....There is still hope in this dark world.....one artistic heart at a time.....Thank you for sharing this personal slice of you my friend. You are loved.

Peace,

Bill :-)

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Great visual write...right up my alley...would lend itself perfectly to an animated piece.



Edwin



P.S. Italy eh? I have family in Ostia Antiqua, Rome, Naples, and Portofino

Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Ouch. Pulled this way and that way, stuck by the sharp pins of life: a painful existance. Reads like a woman in an abusive relationship. Well done, Axilea!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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